Connection

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I thought it was really good, I really liked both of your chorus verses. Well done

Tania,
I like this song a lot!As far as the title.....it's a famous Rolling Stones song.It's up to you whether you want to compete with them for attention.I'd change the title,but the song itself,rocks!
Title idea:Reconnection

It rocks indeed. It's a rather optimistic one. No way it should be sentimental, that would destroy it. No Dolly Parton stuff, please!!!!

I'm gonna have breakfast after reading this one. You made me feel good, Tania!! Thanks.


As regards the title: "Way Out" perhaps?

Thank you all! I will think about the title.

Originally Posted by RickeyJoe

Nice little ditty. Good words. I've only seen one mistake and it was only in grammar, no biggie.

What is the mistake?

I thought about the title. Thank you for your suggestions, but I think I want the title to be a line/word from the song. I thought maybe 'Things I've learnt' ? It seems ok. What do you say?

Wipe your tears.That's my favorite line.

Good one, Doug! My choice: "Way In the Dark"

It's gonna be either Way in the dark or When you're crushed.

Yeah. Haha! Thanks!