i found this on on my phone and am not to sure about this piece.



there is nothing left to say
there is nothing left to feel
in this world
the days turn in to dusk
as quickly as it starts

theres nothing to give
nothing to take
we are all on our own
and nothing seems to change.
"seems to change"


ive givin all that i am
to keep moving on
but am stuck facing
stuck facing
what lies ahead


i keep going on the
same path
never knowing why
it all ways leads back to you


ive givin all that i am
to keep moving on
but am stuck facing
stuck facing
what lies ahead



ive givin all that i am
to keep moving on
but am stuck facing
stuck facing
what lies ahead

I think it was ok. Maybe make the lines a little longer and add some more rhymes? It depends on the music, but thins is what I thought when reading the lyrics.

Ya I felt the same way. I play hard rock/ metal.

heavy metal/rock do not usually depend upon long lyrics,lol,Matt. Without knowing the musicpiece it's hard to say whether more lyrics are needed or not.
I don't feel a gap here... what do you mean by "you found this on your phone"? Is it not yours?

this is one of my pieces. I write them and forget to go back and edit them, which i forget to post also. i tend to write lyrics and and music for them. when i write i am thinking about the music and how this piece should sound when finished.