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Hi, Tania

It is "tore", not "tored" apart,lol

"cliché " really needs the accent on the "e"

"cuz" is grammatically not correct: it's either" 'cause" or "because"

I would also rather see you write :

"and if you left me thinking this thing wouldn't affect
me you're wrong"

these things- as you asked for a little help,lol

to connect black with hate and white with love seems a bit unfair as regards black people, don't you think?

Haha! Oh,ok! Thank you! I'll edit.
I didn't think about the whole "Hate is black and love is white" thing,but now that you mentioned it, I can totally see it. My bad. I'll change that. Thanks again!

Love the chorus especially.I totally disagree with my good friend Amaryn.I didn't put the same thought on the black/white issue.it never occurred to me you meant skin color,not in a million years!I took it to mean opposite sides of the coin.You could say heads and tails and I hope the animal rights people wouldn't come after you!Go with your heart and gut,don't change it unless YOU want to.I hope you don't!(Our coins have a Face on one side,"heads",and the other is called "tails",just in case you were wondering.)

I love this song Foreal..

Thank you!

Hahaha=,lol: Goodevening, Flower Bro, well, fascinating you didnot associate things, I am happy she changed it,lol!

But your line about head and tails made me roll over the floor! A good one, Doug!

Thanks Tania for making the other changes. You are a clever girl!*

Originally Posted by amaryn

Hahaha=,lol: Goodevening, Flower Bro, well, fascinating you didnot associate things, I am happy she changed it,lol!

But your line about head and tails made me roll over the floor! A good one, Doug!

Thanks Tania for making the other changes. You are a clever girl!*

I guess I didn't see the original lyrics that were changed.I had assumed you were speaking about the lyrics that are posted now.I usually agree with your outlook,so I was surprised at your response.Now I understand!

Great stuff. I love the chorus. Read through with relish till i got to the line that made me panic...reading all the comments i know Tania did not actually mean it the way it seemed(@ least she sounded sincere).
Also, there was "pain is blue", so i think the other color-coding followed in that sense, but the juxtaposition of those two colors with the words "love" & "hate" ended up making it sound so divisive.

Tania, just a little sensitivity in later works please. Thanks.

(waiting for Doug to defend the people of the Blue Nation )

Thank you Amaryn.

Blue Meanies (from Yellow Submarine)says it all!