Hi there! it`s my first lyrics written in English. Please anybody tell me if its just stupid or written wrong. May be its necessary to change some lines to they sound good, sound like english people really speak. I`d be greatly thankful if you help.
1
If you r so hot girl
Just one your look so heat my heart
If see you near me
Is more than even the love of God
If when i touch you
Oh what i feel inside!
And if you keep your distance
And it because i`m still alive
CH
So I have a great idea girl
You burn me at all
Burn me at all at all
Burn me at all
all all all all
Just a handful of
Satisfacted ash
Then clear the trash
Just clear the trash trash
2
My mind can`t rest from you
No day nor night
My defense broken through
I can not fight
CH
So I have a great idea girl
You burn me at all
Burn me at all at all
Burn me at all
all all all all
Just a handful of
Satisfacted ash
Then clear the trash
Just clear the trash trash