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And I don’t want you staying forever in this place
I don’t you falling in disgrace
Cause I’m the king and you’re the queen
Of everything we’ve ever seen
Oh you’re so up and I’m so down
You are the crowd and I’m the clown

And I don’t want you involved in politics
I want you far from all of these *****
Far from of all those plastic chicks
Far from the world that lives of beauty tips
You are most worthfull fight
You are the beast I see at night

You introduce so much pain in my heart
I saw evil in you Wright from the start
Please bring me back my world
Give me back my soul
I’m seeing a hole and I’m about to fall
You made of me a bug ready to crawl

I don’t want see your eyes set to kill
I don’t want you being the puppet of someone else’s will
I don’t want pretending that you’re glad
When deep inside you are miserably sad
I want you to be the girl I picked from the floor
In want you to be how you used to, goddess and even more

You’ve morphed yourself
You became someone else
You’ve became so blind
That makes me sad to think you used to be one of a kind
You used to be everything
But I will no longer be your king

Try not to have each line rhyming, it sounds a bit "trying too hard"...


Have the third line rhyming with the first for example...

Unless it's a rap in which case these kind of lyrics are all the rage now, which kinda explains the state of music nowadays...

Originally Posted by Ultimate_Worrier

Try not to have each line rhyming, it sounds a bit "trying too hard"...


Have the third line rhyming with the first for example...

Unless it's a rap in which case these kind of lyrics are all the rage now, which kinda explains the state of music nowadays...

It's not rap, at all !

About the rhyming, i don't use to do it this way, but this one, just... came out this way, you know what I mean?

Any chance you can read what I type, not just look at words...

Try not to have each line rhyming, [/b]it sounds a bit "trying too hard"...
Unless it's a rap in which case these kind of lyrics are all the rage now[/b]

Also, you'll find I gave you some advice on writing lyrics.