first song i've finnish

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  1. sirmimer said:

    Default first song i've finnish

    This is a rap (no really a fast one)

    My first song ive finnish, might need to be changed a little bit, but only a very little.

    let me be your brother
    dont push my away
    tell me not to bother
    brothers
    lets talk
    dont get it bottled up
    you need to get it off from your heart

    brother
    if you live your life like i
    broken heart inside
    you dont share your thoughts with another
    my brothers
    we need to talk with each other
    cause if we dont share our thoughts with another
    we get slap
    over and over
    till we cash

    let me be your brother
    dont push my away
    tell me not to bother
    brothers
    lets talk
    dont get it bottled up
    you need to get it off from your heart

    when you crash
    you get down, it wont last
    you get mad on every around you
    you got bad
    cause you not used to talk with another
    you dont even go to your own mother
    you only show your mad
    they dont know your sad
    and you dont see
    you dont give them any signs
    to see what's on your mind

    let me be your brother
    dont push my away
    tell me not to bother
    brothers
    lets talk
    dont get it bottled up
    you need to get it off from your heart

    please y'all
    listen to message I'm sending you
    dont think you tuff
    (i do not know how to spell this word right, sadly tuff = hard in mind)
    if you dont talk
    please share your thoughts
    people crash
    listen i aint lying
    i felt it myself
    you'll always be on my mind
    please forgive me
    didn't know you were sad
    i only saw you were mad
    we didnt talk for real for a while
    couldn't get close
    next thing i know, you died
    picture this
    me and bro we are alone
    sept hes cold
    hes lying dead on floor
     

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