This is a rap (no really a fast one)

My first song ive finnish, might need to be changed a little bit, but only a very little.

let me be your brother
dont push my away
tell me not to bother
brothers
lets talk
dont get it bottled up
you need to get it off from your heart

brother
if you live your life like i
broken heart inside
you dont share your thoughts with another
my brothers
we need to talk with each other
cause if we dont share our thoughts with another
we get slap
over and over
till we cash

let me be your brother
dont push my away
tell me not to bother
brothers
lets talk
dont get it bottled up
you need to get it off from your heart

when you crash
you get down, it wont last
you get mad on every around you
you got bad
cause you not used to talk with another
you dont even go to your own mother
you only show your mad
they dont know your sad
and you dont see
you dont give them any signs
to see what's on your mind

let me be your brother
dont push my away
tell me not to bother
brothers
lets talk
dont get it bottled up
you need to get it off from your heart

please y'all
listen to message I'm sending you
dont think you tuff
(i do not know how to spell this word right, sadly tuff = hard in mind)
if you dont talk
please share your thoughts
people crash
listen i aint lying
i felt it myself
you'll always be on my mind
please forgive me
didn't know you were sad
i only saw you were mad
we didnt talk for real for a while
couldn't get close
next thing i know, you died
picture this
me and bro we are alone
sept hes cold
hes lying dead on floor