I wrote this song for my wife, its about how we met five years ago at work. I'm new to songwriting and need any advice I can get. It has a Weezer feel to it, and a Ska tempo.

"First Glance Romance"


I cought your eye from across
the room , Time for me to make
the move ./but I keep shakin
I keep thinkin

C'mon lets make this easy
cause your the girl for me
I know it seems so crazy
lets get together and we'll make
it be

I caught you starin back
we know theres somtin we share
and theres somthing we lack,
/These feeling got me goin,
and its startin to show and,
if u feel the same for me

Come on girl make it easy
Im da boy u da girl
its so easy to see, lets go ahead
and make it be

I check your schedule every day
and I hear u been doin the same,
/so if u catch me lookin,
lets drop what we been doin,
and go Eat ohhh

Come on baby make it easy for me!!
lets get together and dance to our own beat
drop this game, ive had it, and we'll be
glad what have it
and lets do what was meant to be
come on baby, "oh Baby "ah" "ah" oH.