First post, need advice

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  1. FrankMcshane said:

    Default First post, need advice

    I wrote this song for my wife, its about how we met five years ago at work. I'm new to songwriting and need any advice I can get. It has a Weezer feel to it, and a Ska tempo.

    "First Glance Romance"


    I cought your eye from across
    the room , Time for me to make
    the move ./but I keep shakin
    I keep thinkin

    C'mon lets make this easy
    cause your the girl for me
    I know it seems so crazy
    lets get together and we'll make
    it be

    I caught you starin back
    we know theres somtin we share
    and theres somthing we lack,
    /These feeling got me goin,
    and its startin to show and,
    if u feel the same for me

    Come on girl make it easy
    Im da boy u da girl
    its so easy to see, lets go ahead
    and make it be

    I check your schedule every day
    and I hear u been doin the same,
    /so if u catch me lookin,
    lets drop what we been doin,
    and go Eat ohhh

    Come on baby make it easy for me!!
    lets get together and dance to our own beat
    drop this game, ive had it, and we'll be
    glad what have it
    and lets do what was meant to be
    come on baby, "oh Baby "ah" "ah" oH.
     

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