Lyrics Help Please! Thanks

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  1. teamid said:

    Exclamation Lyrics Help Please! Thanks

    This is my first attempt at lyrics. It's a blues song that a friend wrote and he asked me to write lyrics for him. I had a dream and while writing it down I realized it was a good idea for a song. I've adapted it somewhat. Thanks!

    You were sitting
    on a sandy cliffs edge
    wondering, searching for me
    looking for what was lost

    The setting sun lit your features
    A lone tear illuminated
    I sunk into the sand next to you
    To see a smile offset the fading light

    Our eyes met as the light began to dissolve
    Shimmering waves mirrored off your dark pupils
    We looked into the setting sun together
    As last light disappeared

    I awoke to the voice of a rumbling ocean
    My eyes turned to find you
    but the only indentations were my own
    I came to the realization
    As a bittersweet longing traversed my bones
     

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