Title:Our Goodbyes

[Time goes by like a clock
In the future its a violent end
As he waits for your time line to run out
We say our final goodbyes before the last moments]-Chorus

Theirs not much left here,or at least left to rely on
A stories been told after the next like a everlasting tail
Theirs always a end to a story so whens mine
I'll stand for a while to say my final goodbyes

[Time goes by like a clock
In the future its a violent end
As he waits for your time line to run out
We say our final goodbyes before the last moments]-Chorus

In moments you will see why we say our final goodbyes
In those moments,those goodbyes final come to a word
Make sure you get them all out till your very last
Or it might be too late and the clock will tick your past

[Time goes by like a clock
In the future its a violent end
As he waits for your time line to run out
We say our final goodbyes before the last moments]-Chorus

By now,a stories been told and the clock has run out
So in the end all our goodbyes will come out
Come out before the very last minute.

[Time goes by like a clock
In the future its a violent end
As he waits for your time line to run out
We say our final goodbyes before the last moments]-Chorus

The Final GoodByes

I know its the title, but you seem to use the word goodbyes alot.
Try to avoid 2nd tense pronouns ("...YOUR time line...")
Verse 1 - Do you mean tale?
Maybe a little hint to who "he" is. It seems like the song's about death so could it be God or the devil? or just death?
You also use the word out alot I just noticed.