Ghady - Dakheelak 3oud

The second one! [correcting mistakes, please]

دابو عيوني وانت بعيد
My eyes melted while you are far away
ضايع قلبي وفكري شاريك
My heart gost lost and my mind is thinking a lot about you
ياللي دبحني غرامك من الوريد
The one who killed me, your love from deep inside

صابر مهما عذابي يزيد
I'm being patient no matter how my torture grows
مهما النار بضلوعي تئيد
No matter that fire burns up in my ribbs
بكرا حترجع حدي من جديد
Tomorrow you'll get back by my side again

بيكفي تعذيب
Enough torture
وحياتك عندي
I swear of your life
شمسي حتغيب
My sun will set
غرقت المخدة
The pillow is sinked
ليلي الكئيب
My depressed nights
بردُه آسرني
You are still prisoning me
دخيلك عووووود ارحمني
Please, come back, have mercy on me

نومي هجرني وصار مفقود
My sleep left me and it happened to be lost
من بعدك دبلت الورود
After your absence, the roses faded
والدنيّ معي طريق مسدود
And the world to me is a dead-ended road

لولا الهوا ما بقلك عود
I wouldn't ask you to come back hadn't it been for the passion
مهما رماني وساد وعود
No matter how much it throws me with promisses
لكن ياللي بقلبي بلا حدود
But the one who is in my heart has no bounderies

بيكفي تعذيب
وحياتك عندي
شمسي حتغيب
غرقت المخدة
ليلي الكئيب
بردُه آسرني
دخيلك عووووود ارحمني

only some few mistakes ,but it's great in general,good job dear ?
BTW how did the exams go?


دابو عيوني وانت بعيد
My eyes melted and you are far away
my eyes melted while you're far away
ضايع قلبي وفكري شاريك
My heart gost lost and my mind is just thinking
free trasnlation=my mind is buying you (it means he thinks about her a lot)
ياللي دبحني غرامك من الوريد
The one who killed me, your love from deep inside

صابر مهما عذابي يزيد
I got patient, however my torture grows
i'm being patient no matter how my torture grows
مهما النار بضلوعي تئيد
No matter that fire burns up in my ribbs
بكرا حترجع حدي من جديد
Tomorrow will bring you again by my side
tomotrrow you'll get back by my side again

بيكفي تعذيب
Your torture is enough
enough tornment
وحياتك عندي
I swear to myself
i swear of your life
شمسي حتغيب
The sun will set
my sun will set
غرقت المخدة
The pillow is sinked
ليلي الكئيب
My depressed nights
بردُه آسرني
?????????????
bardo=still
aserni=had me jailed
you're still prisoning me
دخيلك عووووود ارحمني
Please, come back, have mercy on me

نومي هجرني وصار مفقود
My sleep left me and it happened to be lost
من بعدك دبلت الورود
After your absence, the roses faded
والدنيّ معي طريق مسدود
And the world (?????) with me is a road with a dead-end
and the world to me is a dead-ended road

لولا الهوا ما بقلك عود
If the love doesn’t tell you to come back
i wouldn't ask you to come back hadn't been for the passion
مهما رماني وساد وعود
No matter that it threw me and ?????? and came back
no matter how much it throws me with promisses
sorry وساد is not clear to me
لكن ياللي بقلبي بلا حدود
But the one who is in my heart has no bounderies


that's it ,good try as usual ,keep going smart girl

Thank you for the third time!

My exams went great! I am waiting for the grades now!