Check it & help :D

Thread: Check it & help :D

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  1. MarryKiss said:

    Smile Check it & help :D

    Hi!
    I have written some lyrics Could anyone tell me if they're correct (also gramaticly). I'm not from UK or US. Help!

    I,I always wanted to
    become a famous star
    and that what I've been through
    this showed me that I...
    ...am so pretty, gritty, witty
    have a brilliant voice

    Chorus:
    Admiration, that's what I can't live without
    Every time I succeed beyond any doubt
    Now I have to leave boys and dates on the shelf
    Sing and do my best, I believe in myself, eh, eh!
     

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