Hi!
I have written some lyrics Could anyone tell me if they're correct (also gramaticly). I'm not from UK or US. Help!

I,I always wanted to
become a famous star
and that what I've been through
this showed me that I...
...am so pretty, gritty, witty
have a brilliant voice

Chorus:
Admiration, that's what I can't live without
Every time I succeed beyond any doubt
Now I have to leave boys and dates on the shelf
Sing and do my best, I believe in myself, eh, eh!