Ilham Al madfai - Allah 3alek

Hi,

I need help to correct my translation of Allah 3alek for Ilham Al Madfai one of the best Iraqi singer. This music is amazing, a mix of arabic , latin and jazz rhythms. Some words are written in a weird way but I guess that is due the iraqi dialect.

http://www.4shared.com/file/21396034...ah_aleyek.html

الله عليك الله عليك
Allah 3alek allah 3alek
For Gods sake !

لتحيرني الله عليك
La te7ayrni allah 3alek
Don't confuse me , for God's sake !

تحرمني من هذا الجمال
Ta7roumni men hada aljamal
you have forbidden me your beauty

تحرمني حبك و الدلال
Ta7roumni houbbak w eddalal
You have forbidden me your love and coquetry

قلبي حبيبي بين ايديك
galbi 7abibi ben ideek
Oh my love, my heart is in your hands

الله عليك الله عليك
Allah 3alek allah 3alek
For Gods sake !


الله عليك لا لا تغيب
Allah 3alek la la tgheeb
For Gods sake ! Don't stay/go away

ما عندي غيرك يالحبيب
Ma 3andi gherak yal 7abib
I have nobady but only you

انت الهوى و انت الحنان
Inta al hawa w inta al 7anan
You are love and tenderness

بكربك احس روحي يامان
Bikurbak a7es rou7i ya man
With you I feel my soul in safety (????)

قلبي حبيبي بين ايديك
galbi 7abibi ben ideek
Oh my love, my heart is in your hands

الله عليك الله عليك
Allah 3alek allah 3alek
For Gods sake !



ياللي عدت زهو الربيع
ialli 3audet zahou errabi3a
The spring flowers have returned (?????)

بيعدك حبيبي روحي تضيع
Bo3dak 7abibi rou7i itti3i
My soul just got lost after you (?????)

يا من رضا الدنيا رضاك
Ya men rida ddinia ridak
????????????????????????????

ما انسه يا عمري هواك
Ma ansa ya 3omry hawak
I will never forget your love

قلبي حبيبي بين ايديك
galbi 7abibi ben ideek
Oh my love, my heart is in your hands

الله عليك الله عليك
Allah 3alek allah 3alek
For Gods sake !

Thanks in advance

good job here are a few notes for you:


بكربك احس روحي يامان
Bikurbak a7es rou7i ya man
With you I feel my soul in safety (????)

correction: with you being close I feel that my soul is safe




ياللي عدت زهو الربيع
ialli 3audet zahou errabi3a
The spring flowers have returned (?????)

you brought back the brightness of spring


بيعدك حبيبي روحي تضيع
Bo3dak 7abibi rou7i itti3i
My soul just got lost after you (?????)

with you being away , oh my love, my soul gets lost


يا من رضا الدنيا رضاك
Ya men rida ddinia ridak
????????????????????????????

oh life's content when you are

*note*: this is not the literal trans. but that line is pretty hard to translate, but the general meaning is the same

thank you very much Sohuda, And what about the other verses ? no mistakes ?

yeah thats all I took notes on, like I said good job
keep it up =)