Hi Can someone please check my "translation"? (Sorry in advance for the mistakes...)



راحت ولا علمتني حتى ولا كلمتني
Ra7at wala 3alimetny, 7atta wala kalimetny
She left without letting me know, she didn’t even tell me

بإدينها للعذاب والسهر سلمتني
Bidianaha lel3adhab wes-sahar salimetny
in her hands there’s torture, and insomnia came upon me

يعني نست من أكون وكيف حالي بيكون
Ya3ni nesset mn akoun w keef 7aly byakoun
did she forget who I am, and how my situation will be

عشان بس تعرفون وشقد هي ظالمتني
3ashan bs ta3arefun w shged heyya dhalimetny
just to let all of you know, how much she is unfair to me



راحت وأنا أسأل وراها ودموع عيني تهل
Ra7at wana asa2l waraha w domo3 3iny tahel
She left and I ask after her and there are tears in my eyes

معقول لحد هذا فراقي سهل
Magul le7addi hadha fragi sahel
is it logical?, that my separation is so easy ?

ما تدري إني أبيها وقلبي تعود عليها
Ma tadri enny abiha w galby ta3wad 3aleyha
she doesn’t know I want her and my heart got used to her?

وعشت مخدوع فيها الين ما المتني
w 3asht ma5du3 fiha eleen ma alimetny
I was betrayed by her, until she hurt me


لو قلت بأندم أحس حرام فيها الندم
Law gelt bandem a7as 7aram fiha en-nadem
(If I said) I regret I feel something forbidden about her, sorrow

لأني ما شفت منها غير التعب والألم
Leanny ma shoft minha 3’air et-t3ab w elalaam
because I never saw in her anything but tiredness and pain

وإن كان هذا جزايا على جروحي وعنايا
Wen kan hadha jezaya 3ala joro7y w 3anaya
and if it was my rewarding to my wounds

ببعد وربي معايا وأنسى إنها عذبتني
Beb3ad w rabby m3aya wansa ennaha 3adhibany
(I'd) go far away and my Lord would be with me, and I could forget she made me suffer



Thanks

Hey dear !
It's great Job !
Here are what I could correct !

يعني نست من أكون وكيف حالي بيكون
Ya3ni nesset mn akoun w keef 7aly byakoun
that is, I forgot who I am and how my situation is

Here nesset > Female
did she forget who I am, and how my situation will be

عشان بس تعرفون وشقد هي ظالمتني
3ashan bs ta3arefun w shged heyya dhalimetny
because you know, and ??(shged?) she was unfair to me

shgad = how much
just to let all of you to know, how much she is unfair to me

معقول لحد هذا فراقي سهل
Magul le7addi hadha fragi sahel
it’s logical, except this separation is easy

here it's an question (he is asking)
is it logical?, that my separation is so easy ?

ما تدري إني أبيها وقلبي تعود عليها
Ma tadri enny abiha w galby ta3wad 3aleyha
she doesn’t know I want her and my heart belongs to her

she doesn't know that i want her, and my heart GOT USED to her ?

وعشت مخدوع فيها الين ما المتني
w 3asht ma5du3 fiha eleen ma alimetny
I was betrayed by her, ??(eleen?), she hurt me

eleen = until
I was betrayed by her, until she hurt me

وإن كان هذا جزايا على جروحي وعنايا
Wen kan hadha jezaya 3ala joro7y w 3anaya
if I could only avenge my wounds

and if it was my rewarding to my wounds

Thanks for checking and correcting deal LoOlya

Tell me (I'm just curious), are "shgad" and "eleen" iraqi words? coz I looked them up but couldn't find them at all

Originally Posted by citlalli

Thanks for checking and correcting deal LoOlya

Tell me (I'm just curious), are "shgad" and "eleen" iraqi words? coz I looked them up but couldn't find them at all

You're welcome my dear citlalli !

and yes, they are Iraqi words, also Khaliji people use them !

Ahhhh... I see, I love learning new words, specially khaliji ones Thanks again <3

Originally Posted by citlalli

Ahhhh... I see, I love learning new words, specially khaliji ones Thanks again <3

Ahaa, 7elo kteer !
I hope all the best for you !
You're welcome !