Constant thoughts..

(Not Finished still in progress will be updating)


Verse 1:

Constant thoughts,
running through my brain running through my mind,
as a constant knot
Constant thoughts,
running through my mind making me go crazy,
it's a constant knot


Chorus:

My thoughts are so open,
wide as an ocean,
crazy things go through my mind..
My thoughts are exploding,
everything's open,
things are running through my mind..


Verse 2:

Constant thoughts,
Making my brain go insane it's crazy,
as a constant knot
Constant thoughts,
my mind is spinning going round and round,
its a constant knot


Chorus:

My thoughts are so open,
wide as an ocean,
crazy things go through my mind..
My thoughts are exploding,
everything's open,
things are running through my mind..


Bridge/Ending:

Constant thoughts go through my Brain,
all around its so insane,
my mind is starting to calm down,
I don't know why, I don't know how...

Well you already know that I like this song but I'll say it again I like this song lol. Love the repetition of constant knot and constant thought has a cool sound in my head.

Josh,I usually don't like commenting on unfinished songs,but....for you.....I will!What I love about this is it's simplicity.I can hear this as a Ramones like rocker,if in the right hands.You know...fast,fast,fast!Another good piece of material!

The repetition gives the song a droning, hypnotic quality. Yeah, a Ramones-like rocker ('Mental hell') would be a great idea.

Thanks peter ill give it a go.. what is up with all these German Nike ads on my post?? helpppp..

Originally Posted by JoshD

Thanks peter ill give it a go.. what is up with all these German Nike ads on my post?? helpppp..

Josh....I'd like some Converse,size 10 would do!

Haha!

Here I must admit that the constant flowing of thoughts in restless waves seems rather odd to me when seeing them as a constant knot.
However, thinking of traffic in the streets I can see your point. I wait for the end and will then give my final opinion.
Fascinated anyway!