Clear your clouded eyes/Open up your eyes/ Brighten up your eyes?
Don’t fool yourself, don’t believe
Their actions are justified
"Yet it keeps you locked in fear
There’s not a road you know that leads to anywhere"
OR
"You've been told to stay strong
but you're not sure that's something that you've ever known"
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Which sentence should I use in my song?
Last edited by regularturtle; 08-28-2014 at 02:58 AM.
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I think the first option is a little wordy in the second line, so personally, I like the 2nd option. It depends what direction you're wanting the rest of the song to go though!
~Kerri Faye -
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Id go with the second one out of those 2 options