Yall heads must bow and all tongue confess, Alli the greatest!
Youngin ya tongue tie u aint want it with none
The brighter the stars is the darker the demons
I bite that line from Tyson, so yall can lend me ya ears
I'll make this clear, I fear no man but Allah
What make u think Im scare of this lil bytchazz monster here
All i knows it's fact on fact u been taking notes
Dopest lines MW had was the one he quotes
If this is a joke it's LA-ME ur a bad comedian
Bytch listen up before u get choke on ya knees
That's what I call obedience
Sheit...U can flip my words flip my turd
I still shiet on ya nerds it aint news to confirm
Im coming in hot, top stove n burner
U gonna learn it's death before dishonor
U couldn't earn a single good deed cuz ya flow is bad karma
I come around krazy it's Linsanity no ***** in my armors
I bare warn ya my bare arm will harm ya
When shots rings out u a goner...
Huh..quick hit, love how i get this quick fix with the ganja
I put in easy work with the twist of the spliff
Ay Monster ya bars gonna need more than a man lift
it's the gift and the curse the surge and the burst
Ya all fucc up, u need to drink ya monster n sit in ya church!!!

Now all of you are forgetting about the 3 minute cap
When I mention the rules, you all are questioning that
Let me give everyone a literate lesson
To improve your lyrics, call it a blessing
Learn punctuation and correct grammar that'd be nice
Before I beat your *** down with my fire and ice
Don't mention religion, no such thing as Allah
My bars are exploding like Allahu-Akbar
My times nearly up, the buzzer is beating
Stick to the rules, and take a seating

Originally Posted by WillCrawf

Now all of you are forgetting about the 3 minute cap
When I mention the rules, you all are questioning that
Let me give everyone a literate lesson
To improve your lyrics, call it a blessing
Learn punctuation and correct grammar that'd be nice
Before I beat your *** down with my fire and ice
Don't mention religion, no such thing as Allah
My bars are exploding like Allahu-Akbar
My times nearly up, the buzzer is beating
Stick to the rules, and take a seating

Wait wait wait, follow the rules and learn punctuation? Ha this dude has no street education. What are you doing on here? You trying to be Shakespeare, ill make you disappear. Fire and ice? Let me give you some advice someday you'll the price. Let me ignite this gunfight as I blast you down like graphite. Your so uptight your raps are worse than twilight hey but that's alright. You gave it your best but its time for you to give it a rest. Leave freestyle rapping for people who can actually do it. After this don't go throw a fit, or I'll be back to destroy you with my bars lit.

Disregard this mop up top im cleaning locks
The words in my head spread like legs, the meaning drops
I handle flows like doors- take a turn
Brakes get burned by will that should be your base concern
Lighted the Greatest herb i take ya verbs
And Turn you down you must hate the curve

Buddy it's because I've got basic education
I'll wipe you out, make this an elimination
No street education is what I lack at
Because I was raised proper, no fight back
Shakespeare was a great poet, but you probably didn't know it
Because you're too busy being an illiterate *****
Put you in prison and you'd be a snitch
Stop living in a ditch, let me take this up a pitch
Now why you calling this a gunfight when it's a rap battle
You're missing the point while on your high saddle
See, metaphors are for smart people
Don't reply back and make it a sequel

Will, you rhyme too often
i'd try and teach you
but you can't learn dead in a coffin
that's right b.itch imma kill you
ghostdawg and badguy too
you're lines dont make sense
you'd never be famous you'd never make cents
listen up gents my names JayVee
i put dents in your defence
my offence is that of Larry Hentz
you sit there rhyming and think you're so good
your whole verse is just a falsehood
you wouldn't be hot if you were firewood
if metaphors are for smart people why you using them
you'd have more intelligence if i severed your brainstem
i hope you reply i need a good laugh
f.uck all my skill i only need half

Originally Posted by ghostdawg777

Disregard this mop up top im cleaning locks
The words in my head spread like legs, the meaning drops
I handle flows like doors- take a turn
Brakes get burned by will that should be your base concern
Lighted the Greatest herb i take ya verbs
And Turn you down you must hate the curve

look at that
another wannabe
whose lines are flat
you cant shine no matter what you do
that's why everything you own is matte
B.itch you know its true
ghost ill f.uckin slaughter you
welcome to my house
get it

Originally Posted by WillCrawf

Buddy it's because I've got basic education
I'll wipe you out, make this an elimination
No street education is what I lack at
Because I was raised proper, no fight back
Shakespeare was a great poet, but you probably didn't know it
Because you're too busy being an illiterate *****
Put you in prison and you'd be a snitch
Stop living in a ditch, let me take this up a pitch
Now why you calling this a gunfight when it's a rap battle
You're missing the point while on your high saddle
See, metaphors are for smart people
Don't reply back and make it a sequel

Oh look , dr. Seuss is back. Hes rymning like he did in cat in the hat. no one likes when you rap that. You have no morality, your gunna feel the heat of my calvary, your like the fat guy from monopoly, monstrosity, you cant rap like me when your minds lost at sea. Your rappin like your proper but your raps are worth less than the burger king whopper.i be rappin like imma worldwide chopper.
PS I forgot password for other account so I made new one im still Legend lol

Boys there's different types of rhyming styles
Yours I would say is more like a type of vile
If you'd expand your knowledge, you'd know this
But instead I'll put you in your place, so blow this
I'm talking about my **** of course
You're a wannabe Eminem and Jay-Z that has gone off course
You lads can keep on trying and typing just let the time be flying
But I'll just let you know, you're gonna work for me
Oh and your house? That's what I'll be buying

My penmanship stay sharp it's the penacle of orders
I get big head call it cash flow like the new world order
Boy im on this money talk all i spit is dollar signs
Molla on the clock while I board-walk on park-place, getting mine
Still shine on em got the flow that will flood ya high ceiling
Burn it up got the cut call it the plug on my grind
Multiply by the time n charge it on the line
So tell me willcrawf what have u accomplish in ur life time?
U on here thinking like u spit so righteous
Im suspicious ya life suck? U doing what's been done...
Sure u can buy my house but ya still homeless on the street
U on that bull talk I can tell u been eatting shiet
This the lyrical structure fucc u period what punctuation?
With or without the proper grammar I still slam u punk!
Huh..it's sad tho if u wanna try u can try harder
U might think ya smart but there's always someone smarter
Retard get a grip on life n strife for the finish line
Don't sweat sweet-tard I'm still getting mine
Still fighting like a nikka that aint got nothing on the line
I will end ya will, put u to a crawl u a insect, insignificant
I'm in to win it move moutain with a single rock
Will ya lines are past due give it a rest just vanish
I can cripple ya soul, crush ya life goal till u all diminish...

Originally Posted by WillCrawf

Boys there's different types of rhyming styles
Yours I would say is more like a type of vile
If you'd expand your knowledge, you'd know this
But instead I'll put you in your place, so blow this
I'm talking about my **** of course
You're a wannabe Eminem and Jay-Z that has gone off course
You lads can keep on trying and typing just let the time be flying
But I'll just let you know, you're gonna work for me
Oh and your house? That's what I'll be buying

what do we have here
sounds like a mad q.ueer
a dumba.ss version of shakespeare
that nobody wants to hear
this is the game i endear
look i wanna make it clear to you
i do s.hit none of you can ever do
if you only knew
you would be scared blue
and you're right there are different kinds of rhyme
this one i did it every line
cause my skill is immense
i do another thing you can't seem to
I make sense

Originally Posted by Alliance

My penmanship stay sharp it's the penacle of orders
I get big head call it cash flow like the new world order
Boy im on this money talk all i spit is dollar signs
Molla on the clock while I board-walk on park-place, getting mine
Still shine on em got the flow that will flood ya high ceiling
Burn it up got the cut call it the plug on my grind
Multiply by the time n charge it on the line
So tell me willcrawf what have u accomplish in ur life time?
U on here thinking like u spit so righteous
Im suspicious ya life suck? U doing what's been done...
Sure u can buy my house but ya still homeless on the street
U on that bull talk I can tell u been eatting shiet
This the lyrical structure fucc u period what punctuation?
With or without the proper grammar I still slam u punk!
Huh..it's sad tho if u wanna try u can try harder
U might think ya smart but there's always someone smarter
Retard get a grip on life n strife for the finish line
Don't sweat sweet-tard I'm still getting mine
Still fighting like a nikka that aint got nothing on the line
I will end ya will, put u to a crawl u a insect, insignificant
I'm in to win it move moutain with a single rock
Will ya lines are past due give it a rest just vanish
I can cripple ya soul, crush ya life goal till u all diminish...

first off i couldnt even get through yours
guess you spend too much time on all fours
getting f.ucked in the a.ss
try swallowing glass while huffing tear gas
if you think you can surpass me
i am not no cup of tea
im f.uckin beastly
turn this forum into the dead sea
cause imma slaughter everybody

Originally Posted by xLegendx

Oh look , dr. Seuss is back. Hes rymning like he did in cat in the hat. no one likes when you rap that. You have no morality, your gunna feel the heat of my calvary, your like the fat guy from monopoly, monstrosity, you cant rap like me when your minds lost at sea. Your rappin like your proper but your raps are worth less than the burger king whopper.i be rappin like imma worldwide chopper.
PS I forgot password for other account so I made new one im still Legend lol

really comparing to dr. Seuss
here's a gift from a god
its a noose
put it to good use
unlike your style its not loose
the only cavalry you got
is two fags wearing an ascot and a fat thot
while i brought a f.uckin onslaught
try to upstage me but you cannot
yea you rap like a chopper
cause you're line are choppy
a wannabe rapper so sloppy
tryna be something you cannot be
i'm the next rapper comin out the U.G.
the one and only JayVee

[QUOTE=WillCrawf;1049840]Boys there's different types of rhyming styles
Yours I would say is more like a type of vile
If you'd expand your knowledge, you'd know this
But instead I'll put you in your place, so blow this
I'm talking about my **** of course
You're a wannabe Eminem and Jay-Z that has gone off course
You lads can keep on trying and typing just let the time be flying
But I'll just let you know, you're gonna work for me
Oh and your house? That's what I'll be buying[/QUOTE/]

You call that rap? Even google cant translate that crap. Who mentioned anything about a house? Are we listing things you don't have for example a spouse. Im a Legend but I have a confession always in depression under the sick worlds compression, below the standard of perfection, showing no affection cant see my own complextion. This world is sickening its like Satan is winning. Terrorists are killing, innocent blood they be spilling. But your raps aren't helping what are you doing wasting your time, your trying too hard to come up with a rymn. We aint payin you on the dime. No one listening too you, your like a mime.

Lol look its JayVee or whatever the heck this may be. Your raps drive me crazy its like they are writing by by blind lady. Listen to me and maybe you'll be able hang. Take ya out, shoot ya down, like a one man gang. Imma be like Nadeshot saying bang bang. Trying to challenge me ha ha your a noobie, a trainee, a crappy homosexuality wanna be. Your raps being like crap in the toilet. Now bow down to me because my bars are lit.

Jayvee r u kidding me?
U couldn't body bag a chicken out the deli store!
I make sho my words hurt like open wound, it's a daily sore
We talking bout that dope boy flow, u get scale for more
That dope boy bars that make u go Sideshow/Psycho-BoB..
JV ur far from hardcore, ur a cream-puff just softcore
Even the homeless have more street credibility than this jayvee whhore
Ya flow go nowhere...it's awfully hor-rible writing..:/
U see my slight impression I'm not easily impressed!!
Even my 4 yrs old can square a box n deliver better punchs
Admit it J!!! U that kid that goes hungry cuz u had to give up ya lunch
U might think u grown up a lil bit now but u still a punk!
Most the time u half azz, lopsided shiet with ur rhymes
If u bring more aspects n stop half azzing ya lines
U might get some respect for having a shiety mind...
But u still stuck on fags how u get infatuated with gay lines
MJ be proud of u, so u can just beat-it kid!!!
This that tech to ur wig that make ya toupee jump the skit...
Mouth full of cocain flows that get this whole show rolling stone!!!

Yo all you *****'s stopp'd posting but g im from New zealand so of course id be roasting . Im sharp and ready my shot on COD be sharp an deadly I grew up hard Ill shoot from 1000yards one shot to the head one shot now your dead they call me fnadk oblivius I think thats insane too many Of you lil boys be thinking this raps lame but ill show you that im a king thats the thing ill show you devastation From the nz Nation Yoza

Originally Posted by Fnadk Oblivius

Yo all you *****'s stopp'd posting but g im from New zealand so of course id be roasting . Im sharp and ready my shot on COD be sharp an deadly I grew up hard Ill shoot from 1000yards one shot to the head one shot now your dead they call me fnadk oblivius I think thats insane too many Of you lil boys be thinking this raps lame but ill show you that im a king thats the thing ill show you devastation From the nz Nation Yoza

Ha you wanna rap about cod cus that's what I do best, one shot with DSR to the chest. I'm pro u already know that your raps suck your expression says oh no. I'm so MLG u wish u could be me. I play cod on a flat screen TV. Your a cod pro wanna be. Now let's see if your better than me so pick up your pants and grab that MC.

Every Day feeling suicidal. Havnt felt love in a while. Stuck looking like a piece of garbage. I'm taking in this verbal damage they hold me tight like a hostage. I will try to manage the courage I have against this chaotic carnage. People having fun and celebrating, but I'll be in the corner, head is beating, my ears blearing, no ones ever caring and I'm betting that my brain is going brain dead. Why all of this red Bloodshed. Its like everyone wishing for me to be on my death bed. My mind is mislead it thinks it has no purpose. In this world am I worthless. Sometimes i think so. But at least for today try to say no. -This came from a dark place from within me please someone help me.

Some of you are dumb and unoriginal let me be the preach and preach and talk biblical I'm up in the house about to be the teacher I know you guys have a dream crush, you'll never reach her
I can tell you ask if she's from heaven and she fell in bout to rap so hard ill go to jail then ill get bailed but you'll still be dead in bout to liven up this thread anybody want competition in here but I would understand if you back down in fear