My ignorance Is sophisticated ,
Your p**sy shits outdated ,
Lazy Gives Everyone The Capital Z Faded ,
Go ahead give me the black Eye ,
I'd like to see you try ,
You can't touch Me My Greatness you can't defy ,
You think you Gangster that Is A lie ,
Weed Smoke , G Talk , Cat Walk.
That's your lifestyle ain't it.
What's with all This basic ****.
Your flows weak , It's All Bleak.
The smell of Failure you Reek.
The Greatness I Seek.
Your Mentality Is Weak You barely can't survive a week ,
Take A Look I'm At Your Door ,
Came To Give The D To That ***** ,
Leave Her Real Sore.
My Mother Made A Legend.
You Can't Comprehend.
Times Up , For you It's The End.

Lol no competition! 😂

Originally Posted by ddLS7

Lol no competition! 😂

Like really G' U can't even make sense buh ya claiming be kinga' damn'
Ya nikkah u the Joke' guess u playin'
StandUp comedian”

Originally Posted by Young Akol zeus

Like really G' U can't even make sense buh ya claiming be kinga' damn'
Ya nikkah u the Joke' guess u playin'
StandUp comedian”

I don't make sense?!?!?

U need to re-read them or go back to school or something! Mine make perfect sense, each line structured properly with multiple rhyme sounds, metaphors, alliteration etc. *** u must be retarded

I was spitting at D-low's level when I was 10 years old no lie

Originally Posted by ddLS7

I don't make sense?!?!?

U need to re-read them or go back to school or something! Mine make perfect sense, each line structured properly with multiple rhyme sounds, metaphors, alliteration etc. *** u must be retarded

I was spitting at D-low's level when I was 10 years old no lie

So you've gotten worse.....

Originally Posted by IamTheN

So you've gotten worse.....

you guys make me laugh... If you've read through my verses a couple times and u still don't appreciate them that's fine by me! U keep writing your nursery rhymes thinking you're good, I don't need your approval.

Shout to all the actually decent lyricists on this site, Template and _S are just two from the top of my head. Their opinions would matter to me but anybody with one rhyming sound in each line, no wordplay or any of that good stuff, is simply not on my level.

Don't get me wrong Template and _ S are way better than me I'm not ashamed to say!

Originally Posted by ddLS7

you guys make me laugh... If you've read through my verses a couple times and u still don't appreciate them that's fine by me! U keep writing your nursery rhymes thinking you're good, I don't need your approval.

Shout to all the actually decent lyricists on this site, Template and _S are just two from the top of my head. Their opinions would matter to me but anybody with one rhyming sound in each line, no wordplay or any of that good stuff, is simply not on my level.

Don't get me wrong Template and _ S are way better than me I'm not ashamed to say!

I almost died reading your post. Legit, you call yoursef one of the good rappers out there? Dont lie to yourself man. In fact, i want you to take one of my verses and tell mehow you would make it better. or we could just have a battle, just you and me

Originally Posted by ddLS7

you guys make me laugh... If you've read through my verses a couple times and u still don't appreciate them that's fine by me! U keep writing your nursery rhymes thinking you're good, I don't need your approval.

Shout to all the actually decent lyricists on this site, Template and _S are just two from the top of my head. Their opinions would matter to me but anybody with one rhyming sound in each line, no wordplay or any of that good stuff, is simply not on my level.

Don't get me wrong Template and _ S are way better than me I'm not ashamed to say!

and to be honest, the first time read your posts, i thought you sucked. Still do, considering the fact that i've roasted your *** already with just a few bars

Ok just read some more lines and Young Akol Zeus is good I liked them ones a lot but IamTheN I'd be happy to battle you! Light work

Originally Posted by ddLS7

Ok just read some more lines and Young Akol Zeus is good I liked them ones a lot but IamTheN I'd be happy to battle you! Light work

Kay. And i dont want you to take it personally. Its all good and love around here ill still do the battle though

Of course nothings personal it's just music! Here's some quick ones to start it off

Ok so IamTheN, you're lying my friend/ you'll wish you never bothered tryna type and then send/ youre hyping again, I don't know why you like to pretend/ your life would just end, if u spent one night in my ends/ im providing immense timing while live in events rhyming/ on a stage, with the lights on a blinding my eyes brightness/ im living my life like this, are you living a lie? it's likely/ just gimme the mic, im bodybag zipping this guy/ and when your sister comes home... with a rip in her tights/ don't think I kissed her though bro, she's just my chick on the side/ she rings me coz she knows I put the d*ck in her right/ she must've told you that she gave your boy chlamydia right?/

And I'm so tempted to mention your intent to attempt comprehension...... but you might resent my condescension/ a clear shout for attention, a q*eer doubting yourself and your own reflection/ lived all these years without feeling affection/ ...well that's not quite true you've had your finger in your rectum/ licking up a hotdog wishing for a big erection/ you just called it venting but they called an intervention/ then the only thing you said is you were bored and in detention/

D Low? oh please..
He sat his damn exams and got low Ds.
He's wasting my time with the lines that he shows me..
He needs someone to ghostwrite; I need someone to ghostread.
Hey, I'd say about how he's so weak but there's no need;
You can go see. try post three.
I'd give him my advice but he won't heed.
Guess this is a lesson we both need.
Only, the flow's freed..
This kid still thinks that he don't bleed.
Whoah, jeez.

I free loads.
He freeloads.
D Low:
3-0'd.

Please bro..
D Low..
Couldn't change the game with cheatcodes.
Couldn't win this with infinite reloads.

D Low..
Take it all in. Deepthroat.
This hits like Crazy. CeeLo.
Just stunting. Steve O.
Gangstarr like Primo. beat pros.
Taxi tv show: I'll dispatch him. Devito.
I'll tell him 'this isn't personal sonny'. Pacino.
The score-says-he's gotta die-wrecked. Casino.
Sheen cloned my gene code.
He knows it's beast mode.
Spitting poison like tree toads.
Got more baas than a sheep show.
Say "faded Zs" yo? it sent me to sleep though.
I'll veto all that you deem so.
D Low..
If you gotta bleed slow mind my clean clothes.
Or you'll leak loads like cheap boats or snitches in police probes.
Why am I coming after D..? egos.
Said after D.. E goes.
And I was here before D.. 'see' yo?
He claims he's got a girl; she's never been seen though..
She's going downhill quick so he keeps his skeez lope.
That was cold. sheet snow.
What D-sent was peak, no?

Nowadays y'all only rap about sex and gunfighting.
Kill him like I'm sitting reminiscing; this is 'once I did'.
..Once-I-did? ..One sided?
Nah, just couldn't express it better than one sigh did.

pfft.

Now THAT'S lyrical talent!!! Holy s*it lol

Just trying something while listening to ny music also the second rap i've ever nade please tell me if it is ok


Back in black with a backpack ,a napsack, sniffing up all of that crack

Lol its a good start but 'sniffing up all of that crack'?? Not sure u should be saying that haha

What about this its my first one

Cheers love the cover is here,need a seat? Just sit right here. Sorry lad this seats taken, if you sat down the whole world would be shaken

🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥 haha
keep working on them and keep thinking of new ideas

Respect to SBU, I'll never be testing you - let's be true/ im the opposite of IamTheN -a pathetic desperate yoot/ I thought I'd bless the group with some extra lessons, a test or two/ making some soup out of the alphabet, arrange the letters (lettuce) like vegetables/ I loved a b*tch called Karma, in the end I wonder what I even metaphor/ sick of all her drama with no end reward/ I have to take what's mine, I don't know why you're still content with yours/ never mind you're rhymes, your username contains essential flaws/ are you truly saying your deluded brain is too degraded?/ think you're the only n*gger, here's a rude awakening/ or you claiming u the main black guy?/ you just state facts right? With no take-backs. You're talking out your brave backside/ youre a snake fam I see it with my fake cats eyes/ in my Maybach, you'd say, it's devious the way you chat lies/

Yo nice response I respect that DD, before I start to write these bars freely, apologies in advance if this comes of seedy, but I'll take time out and gives some good readings,

So DD, let's me start this off easy, good word play like wheezy, but this is fall,all have you dropping more then tree-leaves/

Your bars had heat ill accept that it's true, I'm not one to be shrewd, I'd be mistaken to that you as a noob, when I'm the one here spitting that's new.

I'm bemused, that your cruising, with no reply and it's cool, your a fool I bet you did sublime in your school what a tool, bet you thought I was about to get cruel/

These lyrics I embalmed them, released them with calmness, treat me like a sergeant because your bars are pretty harmless, but these are only words the meaning is regardless, think about where spitting got you before your rotting as a carcas, verbally you'll be feeling like car crash, when your face hits the glass it's smashed , and in the after math you can't breathe your plaster in cast, this all happened coz I took your safety no air bags.

Big bars tosney, and thank you for the compliments/ there's others here that like the way i use my vowels and consonants/ they only try and hide it coz they're shy and lack the confidence/ but that's cool... Im only focused on my lifes accomplishments/ syllables and multis go straight over heads of dunces/ while some only read em once and know them ones deh pack the punches/ it's only sticks and stones but if you're stoned go grab some munchies/ we can joke and have some fun (if your opponent gives responses)/
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