i need a chorus help fast review plz

people i need a chorus if you could type a chorus that wud be rad im stuck and we need this thnx its about a girl who you need and want but shes with someone else and doesnt want you thnx...todays special



when im with you
im feel useless
because your full
of excuses
could you lend me
a helping hand
because right now
i need you so bad

can i stand by
you just tonight
can you hold me
just one more time
can we talk now
keep this intact
because right now
i need you so bad


i cant stay here
no this is not right
is it not clear
you are not mine
and i can stay here
and this is not right
and it is not clear
and you are still not mine

people plz just need a chorus im stuck once again

Originally Posted by blink182fan

people plz just need a chorus im stuck once again

when im with you
im feel useless
because your full
of excuses
could you lend me
a helping hand
because right now
i need you so bad

can i stand by
you just tonight
can you hold me
just one more time
can we talk now
keep this intact
because right now
i need you so bad


i cant stay here
no this is not right
is it not clear
you are not mine
and i can stay here
and this is not right
and it is not clear
and you are still not mine

Chorus
It will take time for me to realise that me and you together is a dream
which I see every night and try to wake up before you live
I know you won't even look back your pride is too high
at least turn back for the last goodbye

Originally Posted by petrochik

which I see every night and try to wake up before you live

what do you mean - "before you live" ?

And a tiny question...
why
"...
im feel useless"

why not i feel ?

Originally Posted by Spring

what do you mean - "before you live" ?

And a tiny question...
why
"...
im feel useless"

why not i feel ?

I am sorry for the misspelling live I meant leave.

chorus:

my love for you is something special to me
but youre with another man
and im tryin all i can
to be with you cause i need you through the night
could u be my only girl?
the one i need in this world



or..

chorus 2:
baby, tell me
is there anything i could do to make you see
that your the one for me
all my life
ive been waitin for someone like you
tell me babe what do i do?
so i can get through to you

chorus:

take me!!!
to the place im from (to the place im from)
make me!!
feel like im the only one (the only one)
cause i need you so
cant let u go
i want u now
but cant figure out
..how i can get you to leave him...