short freestyles to real songs

Make Me Better
What’s the day without the sun
is it night without the moon
my love for you can’t be outdone
since we go together like the dish and the spoon
L.P. showing his heart on this song
and as long as I’m with you I can’t go wrong
you part of my conscious, know me better than me
you read my eyes
and separate the truth from the lies
you my better half transcended from up above
so clean and pure like heaven’s holiest dove
they hate and spread rumours
but baby we burn erm up

Like A Star
Girl you’re a star high above the sky
making a wish every time you fly by
hoping the night don’t end tonight
cause it just doesn’t feel right to say goodbye
we share a deep connection
words can’t describe my affection
all I know is you make my heart shine
I’m smiling cause I know you all mine
is it cliché to call you destiny
wanting to be part of your constellation
alone they call me L.P.
soon they’ll call me and you family

What real songs are these freestyles to?


Or do you mean you made a real song out of a rap?

Originally Posted by Ultimate_Worrier

What real songs are these freestyles to?


Or do you mean you made a real song out of a rap?

Make Me Better by Fabulous ft Neyo
Like A Star by Taio Cruz

Right cos I've never heard of these artists or songs

not into that sort of music y'see so I didn't know if those lyrics were the actual ones or ones you'd made up...

hehe.. by ignoring the title; this sounds like something "The Shins"ish.
those songs are on the radio, tv and everywhere else. I envy you ultimate worrier who have not heard them. In my opinion those songs are crap.