Love Letter (Needs alot of Rewriting, but I'd love to get some feedback on it so far

Please ignore the lack of punctuation in my letter
The words just poured out so fast and i was on a roll
I know it's just a bit hard to read,
sooner or later I'll make my handwriting better
but i think you should know that
every pen stroke on that pad was crafted just for you and..

Once i find a stamp i swear to God I'll mail this letter.
Once I get the courage I'll send it straight to you.
And hopefully you will smile as you read it,
nodding at each part that you just know is true.

I know my words arn't always so poetic.
I'm no Shakespeare, I'll be the first to admit.
But im telling you I've got this feeling
sometimes i feel so pathetic
but there's just something about you that says,
"Take a chance, you won't regret it"

I heard these words loud and clear.
Their practically screaming at me.
what can i say what can i do?
The only thing holding me back is fear
fear of what you'll say, you probably think im crazy
maybe I am but a yes is all i ask to hear and

Once i find a stamp i swear to God I'll mail this letter.
Once I get the courage I'll send it straight to you.
And hopefully you will smile as you read it,
nodding at each part that you just know is true.

wow..
if i had something else to write i would.. but i dont..

oh and dont worry, everyone is a bit crazy, you just let your "crazyness" go.. its good.. trust me, the one you like is proborobly crazy atleast like you.. =]

amazing

Originally Posted by OmegaAlienLR

Please ignore the lack of punctuation in my letter
The words just poured out so fast and i was on a roll
I know it's just a bit hard to read,
sooner or later I'll make my handwriting better
but i think you should know that
every pen stroke on that pad was crafted just for you and..

Once i find a stamp i swear to God I'll mail this letter.
Once I get the courage I'll send it straight to you.
And hopefully you will smile as you read it,
nodding at each part that you just know is true.

I know my words arn't always so poetic.
I'm no Shakespeare, I'll be the first to admit.
But im telling you I've got this feeling
sometimes i feel so pathetic
but there's just something about you that says,
"Take a chance, you won't regret it"

I heard these words loud and clear.
Their practically screaming at me.
what can i say what can i do?
The only thing holding me back is fear
fear of what you'll say, you probably think im crazy
maybe I am but a yes is all i ask to hear and

Once i find a stamp i swear to God I'll mail this letter.
Once I get the courage I'll send it straight to you.
And hopefully you will smile as you read it,
nodding at each part that you just know is true.

i'd write it differnetly.
:/
not something i imagine making da charts,