(*) spanichhh

Yesterday,I took a long letter from a friend
He told about me about to you and you replied him as "I forgot him anyway"
besides you told that sentence by laughing and with a honour in your face
you can not forget my two not ended dots ((..) specifies a sentence is not complete)
because to forget,before you have to be forgotten
whereas you are still an old poplar wind, blows on me.
you can not forget
It's not a blood that you can't spit out
It's not a lipstick,you can't clean.
you can't forget my male name that's two syllable , which I wrote to your woman lips my two not ended dots
you can't forget!!
you and me still in a shell
like inside an almond
you are spring,you'll perfume
you're sun,you'll fire
On morning, you're filled with dreams as my bed
On morning,you're warm as my bed
I can't forget
you can't forget!
For the present its ended
I have more words to my other letter
don't take amiss to me ,don't resend ,beware
From Ankara days, and the snow white horizon of city
thousand times greetings to you ..


Spring began my two not ended dots
Spring on Ankara and fruit of it,mother earth
For months,I couldn't write anything to you
Whereas ,now the season is spring
On bird's songs your name,on spring perfume your flavour
Now,I have to write
I looked to calendar today
It has been five months ,from we left
think my two not ended dots (..)
The thing that called five months equals to one hundred fifty days
this long detachment;
belive me my two not ended dots (..)
makes person offended to everything
believe me ,my huff is to everyone
and only yearning is to you
I think…
I think the way that comes out to "lover bazaar" (an area in Ankara)
and rising on the right of that way
on every pass ,smilings comes out from windows
on garden,there are big roses
I think that house blooms apricot roses in the garden
that comes hard, permanency of my thoughts
your sister was walking around without socks
and your mother without scarf ..
I remember ..on this season your father
he was drinking two ,instead of one beverage
when he became myopic "poet ,drink my son
he was telling spring is like a women ,it breeds..
and the spring began my two not ended dots (..)
the spring in Ankara,
on mind horizon, there are rain clouds
Even the season becomes heaven,I don't like
I don't like the spring without you ..
you; ah the most beautiful flamboyance of 24 hours spring
you; ah smiling song of my happiest days
you; ah beautiful child as much as the first summer days
you, ah sensetive world of your gold eyes
Causes a deathless journey
you; ah like an artless dagger
lies full length on my mind
you; ah the thing that's everything ,my everything !
you gave promise to me in your last letter
you tell "hold" to me,I forgot
you tell forget to me ,to forget???
Can sun forget to rise again?
the sentence "heart listens anyone" can be forgotten??
you; ah smiling song of my happiest days
you; ah the thing that's everything ,my everything!



This night is new- year's day
It snows on capital city (Ankara) my two not ended dots (..)
Snow on capital city and I have intense longing for you
memories like smoulder
It snows on capital city,snowing ...
this night is new- year's day
you know my two not ended dots (..)
On new-year's day, the age of people is calculated
this night is new- year's day...
On knobs ,there are 24 syllables
bent on me silently
the clock of old tower in city
you know my two not ended dots (..)?
do you know what it told to me?
"poet ,greetings your age is thirty seven"
and a hand hold from my hairs,carried my heart up to you..
this night is new- year's day, all capital city is on afoot
There's playing Tuna wawes (song) on neighbor's disc.
how energetic this waltz air
I's again began the bleeding of my heart, as ten years ago
How beautiful days they were my dear
how beautiful days...
you ,at the age of seventeen in the mist of loves
a girl ,fumes on her head
me,over the age twenty
Loves every beauty
ordinarily a poet, ordinarily a young man
how the time passed quickly
ah the world...
this night is new- year's day
It's snowing on outside and I have intense longing
old memories like smoulder
a pillow on corner , a picture on the pilow
the spring in Bartın
I painted it myself
on drawbridge, watercourse Kocanaz (special name)
middle scholl on right
children voices inside it
the apple garden of "çakir" family
a caique on the river and I'm on control
you pulling
weather is clear ,weather is warm
weather is clean
and our shadows cuddles to each other on water
this night is new- year's day and capital city is on afoot
the song that played is not "Tuna wawes" anymore now on neighbor's disc..
my heart is away from this lands
It's snowing outside
snow at outside and I have intense longing on my eyes
old memories like smoulder...

Yesterday,I took a long letter from a friend
Ayer recibí una larga carta de un amigo,
He told about me about to you and you replied him as "I forgot him anyway"
Él te habló de mí y tu le respondiste "Yo ya lo olvidé de todos modos"
besides you told that sentence by laughing and with a honour in your face
A pesar de que dijiste eso riendo y con honor en tu cara
you can not forget my two not ended dots ((..) specifies a sentence is not complete)
Tú no puedes olvidar mis dos puntos no finales ((..) especifica una oración que no está completa)
because to forget,before you have to be forgotten
porque para olvidar, primero tienes que ser olvidada
whereas you are still an old poplar wind, blows on me.
Mientras que aun eres el viejo viento en un álamo, que "me sopla"/"sopla sobre mí"
you can not forget
No puedes olvidar
It's not a blood that you can't spit out
No es sangre que puedes quitar
It's not a lipstick,you can't clean.
No es un labial, no lo puedes limpiar.
you can't forget my male name that's two syllable , which I wrote to your woman lips my two not ended dots
No puedes olvidar my nombre masculino que es de dos sílabas, el cual escribí en tus labios de mujer mis dos puntos no finales
you can't forget!!
no puedes olvidar!!
you and me still in a shell
Tú y yo en una cáscara
like inside an almond
como dentro de una almendra
you are spring,you'll perfume
tú eres primavera, tu perfumarás
you're sun,you'll fire
tu eres sol, tu quemarás
On morning, you're filled with dreams as my bed
En la mañana, estás llena de sueños como mi cama
On morning,you're warm as my bed
En la mañana, eres tibia como mi cama
I can't forget
No puedo olvidar
you can't forget!
No puedes olvidar
For the present its ended
En el presente (esto-nuestro amor-) está terminado
I have more words to my other letter
Tengo más palabras para mi otra carta
don't take a miss to me ,don't resend ,beware
No me eches de menos, no respondas, cuídate
From Ankara days, and the snow white horizon of city
thousand times greetings to you ..
Desde los tiempos de Ankara, y la blanca nieve en el horizonte de la ciudad, miles de veces saludos para tí...


Spring began my two not ended dots
La primavera comenzí mis dos puntos no finales
Spring on Ankara and fruit of it,mother earth
Primavera en Ankara y sus frutos, madre tierra
For months,I couldn't write anything to you
Por meses, no te pude escribir nada
Whereas ,now the season is spring
Mientras que ahora la estación es la primavera
On bird's songs your name,on spring perfume your flavour
Tu nombre está en el canto de los pájaros, en el perfume de primavera tu sabor
Now,I have to write
Ahora tengo que escribir
I looked to calendar today
Miré el almanaque hoy
It has been five months ,from we left
Han pasado cinco meses desde que nos spearamos
think my two not ended dots (..)
piensa en mis dos puntos no finales
The thing that called five months equals to one hundred fifty days
Lo que es llamado cinco meses es igual a ciento cincuenta días
this long detachment;
esta larga separación
belive me my two not ended dots (..)
créeme, mis dos puntos no finales (..)
makes person offended to everything
hacen las personas ofenderse por todo
believe me ,my huff is to everyone
créeme, mi bronca es para todos
and only yearning is to you
y sólo mis anhelos son para tí
I think…
Pienso...
I think the way that comes out to "lover bazaar" (an area in Ankara)
Pienso el modo en declarar "bazar amante" (un área en Ankara)
and rising on the right of that way
y crecer justo en ese camino
on every pass ,smilings comes out from windows
en cada paso, sonrisas salen de las ventanas
on garden,there are big roses
en el jardín hay grandes rosas
I think that house blooms apricot roses in the garden
Pienso que la casa (tiene) flores de albaricoque y rosas en el jardín
that comes hard, permanency of my thoughts
Se hace difícil, la permanencia de mis pensamientos
your sister was walking around without socks
tu hermana estuvo caminando alrededor sin medias/soquetes
and your mother without scarf ..
y tu madre sin bufanda...
I remember ..on this season your father
Recuerdo... en esta estación tu padre
he was drinking two ,instead of one beverage
él estaba bebiendo dos, en lugar de un brebaje
when he became myopic "poet ,drink my son
cuando se volvió miope "poera, bebe, mi hijo"
he was telling spring is like a women ,it breeds..
el decía que la primavera es como una mujer, engendra...
and the spring began my two not ended dots (..)
y la primavera comienza mis dos puntos no finales
the spring in Ankara,
la primavera en Ankara,
on mind horizon, there are rain clouds
en mi mente el horizonte, hay nubes de lluvia
Even the season becomes heaven,I don't like
Incluso la estación se vuelve pesada, no me gusta
I don't like the spring without you ..
no me gusta la primavera sin tí
you; ah the most beautiful flamboyance of 24 hours spring
tú; ah! la más hermosa exiberancia de 24 horas de la primavera
you; ah smiling song of my happiest days
tú; ah! canción sonriente de mis días más felices
you; ah beautiful child as much as the first summer days
tú; ah! hermosa niña, tanto como el primer día de verano
you, ah sensetive world of your gold eyes
tú; ah! sensitivo mundo de tus ojos dorados
Causes a deathless journey
causa de un viaje inmortal
you; ah like an artless dagger
tú; ah! como una simple daga
lies full length on my mind
yaces completas en mi mente
you; ah the thing that's everything ,my everything !
tú; ah! la cosa que lo es todo, mi todo!
you gave promise to me in your last letter
me hiciste promesas en tu última carta
you tell "hold" to me,I forgot
dices: esperame, yo olvidé
you tell forget to me ,to forget???
dijiste que olvide, olvidar?
Can sun forget to rise again?
Puede el sol olvidarse de subir de nuevo
the sentence "heart listens anyone" can be forgotten??
la frase "el corazón escucha a todos" puede ser olvidada?
you; ah smiling song of my happiest days
tú; ah! canción sonriente de mis días felices
you; ah the thing that's everything ,my everything!
tú; ah! la cosa que lo es todo, mi todo!

This night is new- year's day
La noche es nueva- día del año
It snows on capital city (Ankara) my two not ended dots (..)
Nievan el la ciudad capital (Ankara) mis dos últimos puntos finales (...)
Snow on capital city and I have intense longing for you
Nieva en la ciudad capital, y tengo un intenso anhelo por tí
memories like smoulder
los recuerdos arden sin llamas

It snows on capital city,snowing ...
Nieva en la ciudad capital, nevando...
this night is new- year's day
Esta noche es nueva- día del año
you know my two not ended dots (..)
tu conoces mis dos puntos no finales
On new-year's day, the age of people is calculated
Un día de año nuevo, la edad de la gente es calculada
this night is new- year's day...
esta noche es nueva- día del año
On knobs ,there are 24 syllables
En tiradores hay 24 sílabas
bent on me silently
empeñados en mi silencio
the clock of old tower in city
el reloj de la vieja torre de la ciudad
you know my two not ended dots (..)?
conoces mis dos puntos no finales (..)?
do you know what it told to me?
sabes lo que ellos me dijeron?
"poet ,greetings your age is thirty seven"
Poeta, felicidades, tu edad es treinta y siete
and a hand hold from my hairs,carried my heart up to you..
y una mano colgó desde mis cabellos, llevó mi corazón hacia ti...
this night is new- year's day, all capital city is on afoot
esta noche es nueva- día del año, toda la ciudad capital está de pie
There's playing Tuna wawes (song) on neighbor's disc.
Está sonando "Tuna wawes" (canción) en un disco vecino
how energetic this waltz air
Cuan energéticos son estos aires de balses
I's again began the bleeding of my heart, as ten years ago
Yo comienzo de nuevo comienzo el sangrado de mi corazón, como hace diez años atrás
How beautiful days they were my dear
Qué hermosos días eran mi querida/amor
how beautiful days...
qué hermosos días...
you ,at the age of seventeen in the mist of loves
tú, a la edad de diecisiete en el velo del amor
a girl ,fumes on her head
una niña, humos en su cabeza
me,over the age twenty
yo, por encima de los veinte
Loves every beauty
amando toda belleza
ordinarily a poet, ordinarily a young man
ordinariamente un poeta, ordinariamente un hombre joven
how the time passed quickly
cómo el tiempo pasa rapidamente
ah the world...
ahh.. el mundo
this night is new- year's day
esta noche es nueva - día del año
It's snowing on outside and I have intense longing
está nevando afuera y yo tengo intensos anhelos
old memories like smoulder
viejas memorias que se queman sin llamas
a pillow on corner , a picture on the pilow
una almohada en la esquina, un cuadro sobre la almohada
the spring in Bartın
la primavera en Bartin
I painted it myself
Lo pinté yo mismo
on drawbridge, watercourse Kocanaz (special name)
el puente levadizo, del curso de agua Kocanaz (nombre especial)
middle scholl on right
??????????????????????????????
children voices inside it
voces de niños en él (el cuadro)
the apple garden of "çakir" family
el jardín de manzana de la familia "çakir"
a caique on the river and I'm on control
un caique en el río, estoy bajo control
you pulling
tu estás tirando
weather is clear ,weather is warm
el clima es claro, cálido
weather is clean
el clima es limpio
and our shadows cuddles to each other on water
Y nuestras sombras se abrazan en el agua
this night is new- year's day and capital city is on afoot
esta noche es nueva- día del año y la ciudad capital está de pie
the song that played is not "Tuna wawes" anymore now on neighbor's disc..
La cancion que sonaba no es "tuna wawes" yam ahora otro disco del vecino...
my heart is away from this lands
mi corazón está lejos de esta tierra
It's snowing outside
está nevando afuera
snow at outside and I have intense longing on my eyes
nieva afuera y yo tengo un intenso anhelo en mis ojos
old memories like smoulder...
viejas memorias como quemándose sin llama


Please , could somebody check my translation, but specially the red sentences Thanks a lot

Hi, Mares, really your translation is GREAT, I will try to make clear your red sentences. I'm not gonna translate into Spanish because my spanish isn't very good, I will explain your red sentences so you can translate them with the real meaning.

Bu yolun sağında yükselen
Her geçişinde penceresinden tebessümler gelen
Bahçesinde iri yedi veren,
kayısı gülleri açan evi düşünüyorum.
I am thinking of the house which is on the top of this road, (the house which ) gives smiles from its window everytime you pass(walk) there, (there are) big roses on its garden,(the house which) blooms roses of apricot

@a little note: of course it is not possible to smile for a house, in this sentence' gives smiles from its window' means the 'owner of the house' comes to window and smiles.


Son mektubunda söz verdin-You have promised (me) in your last letter
Tut diyorsun, unuttum-you say 'keep' (your word/your promise), I forgot
Unut diyorsun, unutmak mı???-you say forget, to forget?
now this is a tricky line that can make very confusion but not for me

Tokmaklarında yirmi dört hece-- En tiradores hay 24 sílabas this is true

Ne de kıvrak bu vals havası Cuan energéticos son estos aires de balses true

Sağda, orta okul--middle scholl on right
??????????????????????????????

hehe Mares, you are right to put question marks because this is a wrong translation orta(middle) orta okul(secondary school) Sağda, orta okul-the secondary school is on the right(direction)

Derede kayık, dümende ben. un caique(it can be also barca) en el río, estoy bajo control true
A caique is in the river, I'm on the rudder/control

I hope I can help Mares, your Spanish is Perfect, I wish my Spanish were like yours. Cuidate mucho

Originally Posted by MaresLejanos

Please , could somebody check my translation, but specially the red sentences Thanks a lot

I think Berna pretty well said it all.

I also think you deserve a gold medal for your patience & effort in translating this long piece, especially since you were given a poor text to work with & because you did not even receive........tu sabes a lo que voy!. Mares, tenemos que aprender Turco con la ayuda de Berna. So, how about it Conejita?

Of course İstanbulgal(when I saw your nickname at the first time I thought that you were from İstanbul) I can help you to learn Turkish gladly

And really Mares deserve so many thanks, she makes a very good effort here in Spanish section

Thank you very much Berna, for your help, I will try to correct my red sentences with your explanations, thanks a lot ... Now I have my brain burnt , I'm just back from my work so I'll do it later.
And don't worry about your Spanish, you're learning pretty fast, you will be very good soon! I'm still improving my English hehehe

Thank you Istanbulgal and Berna for your kind words!!!!

I would like to learn Turkish indeed!!! I love that language, beside the mine !!!

can I also join you girls ? Türkçe öğrenmek istiyorum... lütfen lütfen ?? !!

Of course you can join Karlita, you don't need to ask also your Turkish is really good. Ama öğrenmeye devam et ve elbette ben de sana, İstanbulgal'a ve Mares'e yardım ederim ve siz de bana İspanyolca'da

Originally Posted by Berna

Of course you can join Karlita, you don't need to ask also your Turkish is really good. Ama öğrenmeye devam et ve elbette ben de sana, İstanbulgal'a ve Mares'e yardım ederim ve siz de bana İspanyolca'da

harika