Hearts Like Bombs

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  1. Bryar Perry said:

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    Verse

    You will never know
    Which way to go
    Cross streets
    and broken signs
    Newly paved roads
    and Winding rides
    You can take a detour
    Or you can take a short cut, but
    You'll still end up in the same place
    Stuck in the same rut.

    Chorus

    Run, as fast as you can
    Hearts like bombs in the palm of our hands
    Ready to explode, Just depends on the roads
    we choose to take on our own.
    and if these bombs were to explode
    Ignore the smoke and follow the roads.
    Is the fight inside you squirming?
    Is the air in your lungs burning?



    Verse

    With hearts and hands we'll make a plan
    To run away with arms and minds open
    With the dream that maybe i still can
    Letting go whats lost but still hoping.



    Chorus

    Run, as fast as you can
    Hearts like bombs in the palm of our hands
    Ready to explode, Just depends on the roads
    we choose to take on our own.
    and if these bombs were to explode
    Ignore the smoke and follow the roads.
    Is the fight inside you squirming?
    Is the air in your lungs burning?


    Bridge

    Never drop your arms
    Heartstring guitars
    Chasing dreams
    And run away cars






    BRYAR PERRY 2009
    Last edited by Bryar Perry; 01-15-2010 at 09:36 AM.
     
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    smileygal said:

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    hiyya i really like this song! keep writin man i would like to hear more from you!

    xoxo smileygal!!
     
  3. deadlydeadlybees said:

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    Wow, this is probably my favorite thing I've seen written on this site so far. You have taken the "fork in the road" sort of theme, and made it sound original. I like the ironic heart/bomb simile. Also, it's great that you have unexpected rhyming couplets, because that's what you need for an interesting song.
    Do you know how you want it to sound musically?
     
  4. Bryar Perry said:

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    Thanks you very much guys for the comments, i really appreciate it

    I have melodies to all my songs, i just dont have any music to go with them for the exception of one song(im learning guitar and ive put music to one of my songs) but i was thinking this song will be kinda fast/ maybe poppy/ but the chorus would be pretty intense.

    I was thinking of posting up the song i do have music to, I can make a simple recording.
    Last edited by Bryar Perry; 01-19-2010 at 10:20 AM.