The key

hey guys i wrote a song that i think you guys might like here it goes




I gave you the key to my heart you gave it away the next day like
you didn't care anyway

ch:that shows you can't trust everyone in this world


look before you fall don't give it away

ch:never fall too deep

because you know that you won't get up but just don't give up

ch:you will find someone to treat you good how he should

don't fall so deep just keep your head up.....

Great,but add somemore.

What about:

I gave you the key to my heart
you gave it away the next day
like you didn't care anyway

ch:
This surely states you can't trust anyone
not even the ones you love the most
look before you fall don't give it away
cause you maybe will just lose it in the end

ch:
Never fall too deep
Because you know that you won't get up
But just don't give up
Cause you're not yet out of luck

ch:you will find someone to treat you good how he should

don't fall so deep just keep your head up.....

Yeah thats great!

Originally Posted by Paris13

Yeah thats great!

thanks for your feed back

Your welcome,do you have any more songs