Vama veche - Cu tine & Undeva in Vama

Could someone review my translations of two Vama veche songs, please?

Vama veche
Cu tine

With You

Noapte alba, ajung tarziu acasa
Mi-ai lasat mancarea in cuptor
Jumatate dezvelita ai adormit
Ma infiori, ma infiori

White night, I arrive home late
You left food in the oven for me
Half uncovered you fell asleep
You scare me, you scare me

Ma intind in pat langa tine
Imi ingrop ziua in parul tau
Respiram amandoi impreuna
Ne amestecam, ne amestecam

I lay in the bed next to you
I dig the day in your hair
We both breathe together
We mix, we mix

Ne amestecam trupurile-n noapte
Ne amestecam pan-ajungem soapte
In Limba ta o soapta vreau sa ajung
Sa ma topesc

We mix with our bodies at night
We mix until we reach a whisper
I want a whisper to reach your tongue
For me to melt

In tine vreau sa mor sa ma ascund
Si sa luminez

I want to die in you, to hide
And to shine

Rasul tau duminica dimineata
Ma stropesti cu rosu eu visez
In ochii tai vad restul vietii mele
Ne amestecam, ne amestecam

Your laugh on Sunday morning
You perfuse me with red I dream
In your eyes I see the rest of my lifes
We mix, we mix

Ne amestecam trupurile-n noapte
Ne amestecam pana ajungem soapte

We mix with our bodies at night
We mix until we end up with a whisper

De-acum si pana mor iti dau viata mea
Te rog s-o primesti

From now and until the death I give you my life
I ask you to accept it

Un sac de ? in jurul tau voi fi
Ai sa stralucesti
Cu tine vreau s-alerg
Cu tine vreau sa rad
Cu tine vreau sa tac
Cu tine vreau sa plang
Cu tine vreau sa sper
Cu tine vreau sa iert
Cu tine vreau...

A sack of? Around you it will be
You will shine
I want to run with you
I want to laugh with you
I want to stay silent with you
I want to cry with you
I want to hope with you
I want to forgive wit you
I want.. with you

Cu tine vreau sa rad
Cu tine vreau sa tac
Cu tine vreau sa plang
Cu tine vreau sa sper
Cu tine vreau sa iert
Cu tine vreau sa pierd
Cu tine vreau sa mor
Cu tïne vreau tot

I want to laugh with you
I want to stay silent with you
I want to cry with you
I want to hope with you
I want to forgive with you
I want to lose with you
I want to die with you
I want everything with you.

Vama veche
Undeva in Vama

Somewhere in Vama

Ar putea sa fie plaja..somnului de dupa pranz
Zona sufletelor noastre...fara acces pentru turisti
Fara zgomotul vietii...cu orice pret
Ti-as aprinde eu tigara...cu o lupa de citit
Soarele iti incalzeste trupul...pentru seara ce vine
In curand o sa arzi toata noaptea piele de foc

It could be a beach.. of the sleep after lunch
Zone of our souls.. without access for tourists
Without noise of life.. with any price
I would light you a cigarette.. with a magnifying glass for reading
The sun warms the body.. for the evening which is coming
In a little while skin will burn from fire all night

Refren: Undeva prin Vama....cand betivi dorm
Soarele rasare..ne vede impreuna si parca s'ar ascunde sa nu deranjeze dar nici el n-are somn
Expozitia mea de scoici...cu vanzare pe sarut
De la noua pan' la sase tin deschis
Sau vrei sa-nnotam catre spuma din zare?

Somewhere in Vama.. when drunkards sleep
Sun rises.. it sees us together and seems to hide so that it wouldn’t disturb us, but neither it has sleep
Exhibition of shells.. with a sale through a kiss
It’s open from nine to six
Or do you want us to swim towards foam of horizon?

Am sa intru-ntine si-am sa cad in gol
Tremur tot si imi vine sa plang
Cum sa ametesti de la un sarut ?!
Limbile noastre danseaza pe cer..
Iubit-o tu imi dai mai mult decat cer....
Sanii tai arsi imi strivesc inima...
Iubit-o unde duce iubirea ta?

I will come into you and I will fall in emptiness
It’s all tremble and I’m coming to crying
How to…. from a kiss?
Our tongues are dancing in the sky
My beloved, you give me much more than sky
You breasts … crush my heart
My beloved, where is your love going?

Undeva in Vama cand betivi dorm
In ultimul cort e inca linïste...

Somewhere in Vama when drunkards sleep
There is some quietness in the last tent

Originally Posted by Euridike

Could someone review my translations of two Vama veche songs, please?

Vama veche
Cu tine

With You

Noapte alba, ajung tarziu acasa
Mi-ai lasat mancarea in cuptor
Jumatate dezvelita ai adormit
Ma infiori, ma infiori

White night, I arrive home late
You left food in the oven for me
Half uncovered you fell asleep
You scare me, you scare me

Ma intind in pat langa tine
Imi ingrop ziua in parul tau
Respiram amandoi impreuna
Ne amestecam, ne amestecam

I lay in the bed next to you
I dig the day in your hair
We both breathe together
We mix, we mix

Ne amestecam trupurile-n noapte
Ne amestecam pan-ajungem soapte
In Limba ta o soapta vreau sa ajung
Sa ma topesc

We mix with our bodies at night
We mix until we become / turn ourselves into whispers
I want a whisper to reach your tongue
For me to melt

In tine vreau sa mor sa ma ascund
Si sa luminez

I want to die in you, to hide
And to shine

Rasul tau duminica dimineata
Ma stropesti cu rosu eu visez
In ochii tai vad restul vietii mele
Ne amestecam, ne amestecam

Your laugh on Sunday morning
You perfuse me with red I dream
In your eyes I see the rest of my life
We mix, we mix

Ne amestecam trupurile-n noapte
Ne amestecam pana ajungem soapte

We mix with our bodies at night
We mix until we end up whispers

De-acum si pana mor iti dau viata mea
Te rog s-o primesti

From now and until the death I give you my life
I ask you to accept it

Un sac de ? in jurul tau voi fi
Ai sa stralucesti
Cu tine vreau s-alerg
Cu tine vreau sa rad
Cu tine vreau sa tac
Cu tine vreau sa plang
Cu tine vreau sa sper
Cu tine vreau sa iert
Cu tine vreau...

A sack of? Around you it will be
You will shine
I want to run with you
I want to laugh with you
I want to stay silent with you
I want to cry with you
I want to hope with you
I want to forgive with you
I want.. with you

Cu tine vreau sa rad
Cu tine vreau sa tac
Cu tine vreau sa plang
Cu tine vreau sa sper
Cu tine vreau sa iert
Cu tine vreau sa pierd
Cu tine vreau sa mor
Cu tïne vreau tot

I want to laugh with you
I want to stay silent with you
I want to cry with you
I want to hope with you
I want to forgive with you
I want to lose with you
I want to die with you
I want everything with you.

Vama veche
Undeva in Vama

Somewhere in Vama

Ar putea sa fie plaja..somnului de dupa pranz
Zona sufletelor noastre...fara acces pentru turisti
Fara zgomotul vietii...cu orice pret
Ti-as aprinde eu tigara...cu o lupa de citit
Soarele iti incalzeste trupul...pentru seara ce vine
In curand o sa arzi toata noaptea piele de foc

It could be a beach.. of the sleep after lunch
The area of our souls.. without access for tourists
Without noise of life.. with any price
I would light you a cigarette.. with a magnifying glass for reading
The sun warms your body.. for the evening which is coming
In a little while your skin will burn from fire all night

Refren: Undeva prin Vama....cand betivi dorm
Soarele rasare..ne vede impreuna si parca s'ar ascunde sa nu deranjeze dar nici el n-are somn
Expozitia mea de scoici...cu vanzare pe sarut
De la noua pan' la sase tin deschis
Sau vrei sa-nnotam catre spuma din zare?

Somewhere in Vama.. when drunkards sleep
Sun rises.. it sees us together and seems to hide so that it wouldn’t disturb us, but neither it has sleep
Exhibition of shells.. with a sale through a kiss
It’s open from nine to six
Or do you want us to swim towards foam of horizon?

Am sa intru-ntine si-am sa cad in gol
Tremur tot si imi vine sa plang
Cum sa ametesti de la un sarut ?!
Limbile noastre danseaza pe cer..
Iubito tu imi dai mai mult decat cer....*
Sanii tai arsi imi strivesc inima...
Iubito unde duce iubirea ta?

I will come into you and I will fall in emptiness
I'm all shaking and I want to cry
How to feel dizzy from a kiss?
Our tongues are dancing in the sky
My beloved, you give me much more than I ask for
You burned breasts crush my heart
My beloved, where is your love going?

Undeva in Vama cand betivi dorm
In ultimul cort e inca linïste...

Somewhere in Vama when drunkards sleep
There is some quietness in the last tent

"Cer" has 2 meanings, the first one is of the noun translated with "sky" and the other one is the present tense of the verb "a cere"="to ask", first person, singular, "eu cer"="I ask". In this song, it has the second meaning..
P.S: Again, you did a great job, keep it going

You're very kind! and I'll keep it going whenever I hear a nice Ro song