Relationship lyrics

About 2 different girls- 1 old and 1 new girlfriend.

First verse: trouble with old girl
2nd: moving on
3rd: new gf

the lyrics are to a sample of the trance song Stereo Love but ive got rap lyrics.

there are a lot of extended images in this and the third verse changes the flow

honest evaluation pls- + constructive criticism

One Love
(Stereo Love background)

You see me inside,
You see my real mind,
You make me feel so alive
I can’t believe it’s real life

Our heart’s beat in time,
Our stars fall in line,
I just treasure this time,
Cos I can’t press rewind,

I want you my whole life
I want you my whole life
I want you my whole life
I want you my whole life

You know...

I’d never felt love like this before,
It’s war, reason flew out of the door,
Cos the window was taken, lookin for,
You, pleasing you was my one cause,
Meetin you was my one joy
Leadin me on- you never found one boy,
The seasons moved on- so I set my ploy,
To ‘meat’ you some more when you’re acting coy,
Cos I’m a fish out of water, you’re the shark n,
When you kept carping on I’d fake the laughter,
You never took the bait, I’ll never be your master,
We ego masturbate, so after disaster,
I’m there faster than a lion to give the plaster,
I’m a shoulder to cry on, then wipe the floor with after,
But your my soul’s Zion, I’m the poorly martyr,
I don’t mind, I’m still tryin for your ‘mornin after’.

You see me inside,
You see my real mind,
You make me feel so alive
I can’t believe it’s real life

Our heart’s beat in time,
Our stars fall in line,
I just treasure this time,
Cos I can’t press rewind,

I want you my whole life
I want you my whole life
I want you my whole life
I want you my whole life

Yeah...

How things move on, how feelings change,
Love- losing one, you’ll never feel the same,
Or so they say, I’m still cruising on,
Not bruised but strong, I seize the day,
But something’s wrong, love epilepsy,
Tell myself you’re gone, but it still gets me,
Hearing an old song, can still upset me,
The hearing’s long for love crimes- arrest me.
Cos I’m holding on, I’m ever ready,
I soldier on- I still think you’re sexy,
Hell, I’m moulded on, everything you made me,
Cold stone I grow on, but never rolling gently,
I still feel our bond, every time you text me
I feel we’re swans, but will you reject me?
One in a million, but do you respect me?
But are you a mere want? That’s there to vex me.

You see me inside,
You see my real mind,
You make me feel so alive
I can’t believe it’s real life

Our heart’s beat in time,
Our stars fall in line,
I just treasure this time,
Cos I can’t press rewind,

I want you my whole life
I want you my whole life
I want you my whole life
I want you my whole life

BRIDGE: And sometimes, I wish I had never met you,
And sometimes, I hope I never forget you.

Funny how I can now see light glimmering at the end,
Running wild on my mind grapes, the thought of a new friend,
Hunting you into my love, you’re too foxy to relent,
Sunny times, know what you want, there’s no need to pretend
Maybe we can amend, maybe I can repent,
The sins of past passion, maybe we can ascend
Maybe love can build a bridge to Heaven solely and then,
A stairway to bed, wed, then in union blend
What we have put together let no other man rend
I know we ‘re meant together, I know I will defend,
You, from the slings and arrows, the shooter I’ll apprehend,
Tell David he’s like Darrow, he should know the portents,
Our love is unbreakable, untouchable, unmistakeable,
Unshakeable- holy peace- inspirational
To love her is as easy as breathing- respirational
‘More details would be pleasing?’ Just say she makes me stable.

You see me inside,
You see my real mind,
You make me feel so alive
I can’t believe it’s real life

Our heart’s beat in time,
Our stars fall in line,
I just treasure this time,
Cos I can’t press rewind,

I want you my whole life
I want you my whole life
I want you my whole life
I want you my whole life

lyrics like what you written required so much inspiration and insight. they are very strong and welll coordonated with much meaning.

I'm in a relationship but not sure how I really feel about it anymore. I don't know if I want change in the relationship or just need a change in my life in general. Anyone know of any song lyrics, quotes or sayings I could use to express myself about it?
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Originally Posted by insistasia

lyrics like what you written required so much inspiration and insight. they are very strong and welll coordonated with much meaning.

Thanks, that means a lot

I hope I mixed meaning with technical skills too.

anything you've done I'll look at if you want?

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