Rap Called Wow By RussoSmith Feel Free To Comment.

CHORUS:wowwwwwwwww!
everybodies comin'
wowwwwwwwww!
no time for your yawnin'
wowwwwwwwww!
theres a lyrical storm n'
wowwwwwwwww!

lets drop that beat

Verse 1: don't see the point why you wanna follow me
be yourself, or you will die in this economy
why don't ya just think globally
won't get anywhere if you think local, see.
uh!, got time to waste lets get the drinks in
PARTY TIME is what u should now be thinkin'
now i'm drunk, don't have a clue what drinkin'
feel the funk, let them dodgey pills sink in
(Pause)
wow i've hit a slam dunk!
but it's your world am bouncin, the conversation makin us sproutin'
as per usual, its me your doubtin'
ohh yess its you who im scoutin'........ for
soon its me who you truly adore
love-makin', from the bed to the floor
come on girl you know you know the score
haha.

CHORUS:wowwwwwwwww!
everybodies comin'
wowwwwwwwww!
no time for your yawnin'
wowwwwwwwww!
theres a lyrical storm n'
wowwwwwwwww!

drop that beat

Verse 2: best party advice: is turning up with me
plus i want everybody to see that your with me
man it's clearly Russo Smith who they now want to be
heads turning, lookin' at ya like your a bit a meat
pick whatever and any drink, yes it's my treat
finally it's me and you, forget about technology
i've got feelings too, their crazy as astrology
got myself together, no matter what likes the wheather
truth be told, you could not get a better fella
love you, man your sweeter than nutella
lets hit the sheets sit'n'talk and just chilla'
your my one, i know nobody is realer
thats it, i'm your new speed-dial dealer.

CHORUS :wowwwwwwwww!
everybodies comin'
wowwwwwwwww!
no time for your yawnin'
wowwwwwwwww!
theres a lyrical storm n'
wowwwwwwwww!

drop that beat

wowwwwwwwww!
just drop that beat.



might sound weird when you read it yourself

I had no problem making the flow work
Nice to see a rapper that isn't talking about making money or killing people
or how he's the best rapper.

Only thing I'd say is that some of the rhyme's are a bit weak and irrelevant, like I can tell where you've thought of a word that rhymed, even if it has nothing to do with what you're rapping about, and you've just found a way to put it in.

Hope this helps.

I know, to be honest that was just made up at the computer.
if i had a good beat and put in 100 percent i would be in the charts.

Originally Posted by Russo Smith

I know, to be honest that was just made up at the computer.
if i had a good beat and put in 100 percent i would be in the charts.

You f*cking idiot.
No you wouldn't.

haha man am no idiot, you don't know me or what i do.what you've wasted time reading is my boredum.
stop acting like you know what your talking about, all your gonna get is what you give and giving me cheek means your getting a punch to the cheek
haha

Originally Posted by Russo Smith

haha man am no idiot, you don't know me or what i do.what you've wasted time reading is my boredum.
stop acting like you know what your talking about, all your gonna get is what you give and giving me cheek means your getting a punch to the cheek
haha

I challenge you to do 3 things:

1) Punch me.
2) Write something worth reading.
3) Write a song that makes it into the charts.