Its whtevaaa..

yo.. yo i get shorty lik, travolta an Devito.//
she put together betta than a tuxedo....
she alwayz wanna go, i alwayz chilll...//
she say we least got tah meet up in da MIDDLE....

yo how does aTrip sound, TOLEDO...//
say im down, jus yah bring yah size ZEROOO..
DO U GOT EUNFF ROOM FAH MY EGOOOOOOOO.................//
DO YOU , DO YOU , GOT SUM ROOM FAH ALL MY PEOPLEEE....
im tyin get it in like I a KEY YO..//
im tryin tah lock da door behind me, NO PEEP HOLE.....
im tryina tah do this shyt..
im tryina do it big....//
LeBRON james, tryina make my city witness it......

if i fail
lord so help god....//
i will not put tail ......between my legs an walk.../
im goin to tha board wif a shyt load of chalk...
drawiin up sum scheme, wif creative marks...///

anybody who dont lik my shyt, I ONT GIVA FUKKKKK...
I ONT DO IT FOR YAH..... i do it fah me, an make me feel GOOOD...../
my hearts in da right place, where da fuk is YAHS......ova....

Dude im not tryin to diss you take it as constuctive criticism your lyrics dont rhyme alot the flow is a little chopy and dude this is what pisses me off never say that your spitin from the heart less it really is cause if those lyrics are from the heart that thats weak and im not dissin you dog even though this sounds pretty rough.

got u homie...buuh u aint hearin it if u think da shyt ont ryme yo..im doin it to a beat brah...buh i got u mayne,,, preciate it do dawg... an im sayin im hearts in da right place ,,, rappin to feel good an get **** out... tell my story yah smell me....

Originally Posted by DUKECITYPOET

got u homie...buuh u aint hearin it if u think da shyt ont ryme yo..im doin it to a beat brah...buh i got u mayne,,, preciate it do dawg... an im sayin im hearts in da right place ,,, rappin to feel good an get **** out... tell my story yah smell me....

Can you also write in general English 'mayne' ?