There You Go

Why did you insist on breaking my heart?
I should have known about your brief reprise,
Everyone else told me exactly what you did,
But I didn’t believe, didn’t believe,

That you could be so cruel,
Left me feeling such a damn, damn fool,

Now there’s no love lost,
No love found,
There’s nothing between us now,
Because when you turned away from me,
That’s all I needed to see,
To know,
Well, there you go,

Why do I always play that girl?
The girl who makes all the stupid mistakes,
The one who falls for the one no one trusts,
You said you loved me, you loved me,

But when the words were said,
Your roaming eyes were cold and dead,

Now there’s no love lost,
No love found,
There’s nothing between us now,
Because when you turned away from me,
That’s all I needed to see,
To know,
Well, there you go,

The door’s closed and the blinds are down,
There’s no way you’ll come around,
If I see you face, I know that I,
I’ll break down and cry,
And ask you why?

Now there’s no love lost,
No love found,
There’s nothing between us now,
Because when you turned away from me,
That’s all I needed to see,
To know,
Well, there you go,

If I see you face, I know that I,
I’ll break down and cry,
And ask you,

Why?

Yay, I really like "Now there’s no love lost,
No love found,
There’s nothing between us now"

and

"Why do I always play that girl?
The girl who makes all the stupid mistakes,
The one who falls for the one no one trusts"

This bit is a great ending: "If I see you face, I know that I,
I’ll break down and cry,
And ask you,

Why?"

Heehee, thanks
Do you even do criticism??

I criticise TV shows to make up for it

Ah. I've no complaint

Lol guys yeah me too I guess, I don't criticize a lot. But it's like I've said before, every "creation" is just that, a personal creation, and even if some of us might see an imperfection here and there, maybe it's just part of the personal signature of the one who wrote it. And if it's good, then it's art, and it has its own unique value.

For me, if something is really bad I'm usually just gonna move on and not say anything at all and of course many others do the same. So just the fact of never getting comments is a form of criticism, most likely telling people that they need to work-work-work on their writing, or just give up coz they just ain't got it But talent must be recognized and encouraged, so we can enjoy more and more of it!

Originally Posted by Katie13

Now there’s no love lost,
No love found,
There’s nothing between us now,
Because when you turned away from me,
That’s all I needed to see,
To know,
Well, there you go,

Great lyrics. I love a chorus flow. It has some not typical nice melody. I like it

Thank you!!!