Silent Curse

When we are over
And you're six feet underground
I'll fill my core with silence
I will not make a sound

No words
No sounds
Just air
Comes out
My mouth

And I'll keep up with this quiet
Til I see your face again
So you can tell me it's alright
That you are safe in heaven

No words
No sounds
Just air
Comes out
My mouth

The tears will flow out
When you come to me first
Then I'll write you a song
And sing every verse

Cause I need your permission
If I'm to ever speak a word
I need at least a whisper
To break this silent curse

But until then..
No words
No sounds
Just air
Comes out
My mouth

(c) 2011

After finding your other post I just had to check out some of your lyrics and I'm glad I did, because this is amazingly expressive and sensitive ... it's a phenomenal piece of writing I think, in every way I could name. I would even hope you have some kind of professional path you could pursue on something like this. I can imagine (in a very real way) hearing these words sung on the airways.

Thanks That means a lot to me. I thought about pursuing it at one point but everything is still up in the air for me

Originally Posted by jandros

After finding your other post I just had to check out some of your lyrics and I'm glad I did, because this is amazingly expressive and sensitive ... it's a phenomenal piece of writing I think, in every way I could name. I would even hope you have some kind of professional path you could pursue on something like this. I can imagine (in a very real way) hearing these words sung on the airways.

damn... not much to say but damn... that pretty deep. good use of words. very expressive...I agree. what kind of music was this writen to?
don't really matter... damn good job...

It wasn't really written to any music..but I guess I'd like it to have a more acoustic feel