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Originally Posted by _SBU

your "speech is a damned movie"? it seems you need to read a bit.
you're the queen of the damned movie dying like Aaliyah did.
I should kick you off this rapforum of mine,
staggered like Bacchus with amphoras of wine.
you don't know rap's "future" or the history of it.
we "cross words", like your english teachers did.
"we cross-words" and I've got 'pseudo-ku'dos for you.
the wordplay's 'hangman'.. you rock a noose- your 'drops' are 'looped'.
or.. as you front like a pawn. this is 'chess' and I'm "regal".
or.. since you're basically sick, kid 'connect the dots' to measles.
we "cross-words"- crypt'ic.
the underground 'digs it'.
we "cross-words" and you cant match passion..
I'mma go ham since your game's more like 'back-gammon'..
this is rap. standard.
This ain't -"Sinbad"s 'seven seas'- thats backwards.
I -'see seven' 'bad'Sins'- and land 'em.
you're shine's faded out like paraffin lanterns.
your light died. in hindsight you used to be quite fly;
now you view 'Windows' like falling off a "high-rise".

Haha sinbad the comedian dawg. U 'bring laughs like sinbad' (the comedian)


Try sicker than ever bud - I'm swifter like bettered trucks,
crisper than veter'n stunts - will blister like weather does.

I'm Rich in unfettered luck - will stick in 'contender' club...
Look mister I've tender touch that'll render you splendor struck.

You've got rhetor...what?
'Rhetoric'al question bro...
Your letters all but end up plethorically lessening blows.

U could euphorically grow or flow, tho - (invest in both)
Or let my formidable tone wrestle your restive pros..

Impressive, no?
Well I'm restless yo... - ...to an art form
Infecting foes in a reckless pose, across large forums.

I'm a marksmen like 'Jordan' - lyrical vigilante in bulk...
You're 'Matt Harpring' to my superior stampede of 'bulls'.

Originally Posted by smoothtung

Haha sinbad the comedian dawg. U 'bring laughs like sinbad' (the comedian)


Try sicker than ever bud - I'm swifter like bettered trucks,
crisper than veter'n stunts - will blister like weather does.

I'm Rich in unfettered luck - will stick in 'contender' club...
Look mister I've tender touch that'll render you splendor struck.

You've got rhetor...what?
'Rhetoric'al question bro...
Your letters all but end up plethorically lessening blows.

U could euphorically grow or flow, tho - (invest in both)
Or let my formidable tone wrestle your restive pros..

Impressive, no?
Well I'm restless yo... - ...to an art form
Infecting foes in a reckless pose, across large forums.

I'm a marksmen like 'Jordan' - lyrical vigilante in bulk...
You're 'Matt Harpring' to my superior stampede of 'bulls'.

put in more work 'coz that's not a sick note.
you're not "Rich" or 'ard, you're a 'D!ck' though.
you're straight f*cked. wait up..
this is '2-"large for-um".. the way I break 'c*nts'.

I've got the best structures and my weapons shred cover.
you drop those bad 'triplets' like you're a stressed mother.

I "in-'vest"ed and you perished in this winter "weather".
f*ck your "stampede of bulls"-h!t, I've skill an' venom.
I'm an animal with bars. your frees stink like stench from petshops.
my 'quills' take down 'kingpins' like I'm bowling hedgehogs.

"a marksman" to excuse the fact your track's bait fam?
the lyrics are tripped out like "Jordan" in SpaceJam.

"Impressing" you and I'm-pressing you too.
my written imagery's like pressing 'youtube'.
"to an 'artform"? ..that's valid.
you've 'Smoothtung' but lack 'palate'.
you're bringing nothing and can't void my weight.
this is "an artform" and lines join the points I make.
you can't rise to power so you try to doubt a mind that's prouder.
I know you're not 'rad' like I'm packing h.r Geiger-counters.

this is some sh*t which you should've left alone.
I love hiphop more than you could ever know.

I broke up your structures with the force of a dropped verse;
your style's got enough 'glu-on' to 'con-CERN'.'


______
*enough glue on to concern: broken and fixed up so many times as to be worrying.
*enough gluon to con CERN: 'gluons' are subatomic particles which bind. so could con(/fool) CERN, which breaks down atomic structures.

Your concerned I'm a con sir? - Certainly I'm awesomer.
I'd con 'CERN' to let these 'nuclear bombs' burn..

I'm a monster err... -
...a 'croupier' 'law-firm'
I foster 'sterne' (stern) bets like lucifers harbor.

Your 'fun' is too crude - finnish to the next pose...
You're 'YouTube' is 'imagless text' like the net froze.

I test those who seem to hold weight to their claims,
You let fall by your feet like you'd been gravely maimed.

(A 'croupier' is a card dealer, so deals with 'bets')
An u get the bear 'sterne' reference right... *it was a firm/panzi scheme. Stole a lot of peoples money. Hence the 'lucifer' reference
..also stern with harbor. Stern of a ship...

CERN deals with nuclear intelligence
An
When the net freezes you get 'text' saying so

Originally Posted by smoothtung

Your concerned I'm a con sir? - Certainly I'm awesomer.
I'd con 'CERN' to let these 'nuclear bombs' burn..

I'm a monster err... -
...a 'croupier' 'law-firm'
I foster 'sterne' (stern) bets like lucifers harbor.

Your 'fun' is too crude - finnish to the next pose...
You're 'YouTube' is 'imagless text' like the net froze.

I test those who seem to hold weight to their claims,
You let fall by your feet like you'd been gravely maimed.

(A 'croupier' is a card dealer, so deals with 'bets')
An u get the bear 'sterne' reference right... *it was a firm/panzi scheme. Stole a lot of peoples money. Hence the 'lucifer' reference
..also stern with harbor. Stern of a ship...

CERN deals with nuclear intelligence
An
When the net freezes you get 'text' saying so

I'm lyricism's synonym. show growth like a Chrisalis.
I'd "harbour" "Lucifer"; flowing like the river styx.
I'm too "stern" so 'bow' down. this 'star-bored' of your final words.
I'm more like a fortified 'port' 'till your 'whine's reserved.
try to work a better flow next round. don't get proud.
it is "like the net froze" as my lines 'mow-dem down'.
you're far less skilled but still seem as arrogant.
My 'formula won' so I "Finnish" like Mika Häkkinen.

Dawgg Hahah u gotta give props ta my references. Damn right I ain't as good but I'm gettin there

I wont be on for another like 8 days on vacation guys if your wondering

Originally Posted by Deleterious

I wont be on for another like 8 days on vacation guys if your wondering

sit back and think of ways to get at and harrass
raw scabs formed on his jaw and abs after beng
stabbed multiaple times in the back seat of a cab
with a piece a broken glass
day dreaming of the day your capable to surpass me
that day will never come to pass G'ee..
lift weights for years straight you still would not be
in the shape that it would take for you to outlast me
I'm fresh, your rotten like decomposing rectums
I eat M.C.'s like i do a pieces of 'kraft cheese'
your just a kid in class screaming "arts and crafts please"
its easy to smack keys, protray the image of M.C.
saw snoop dogg on T.V. and said "thats who i wannabe"
but in reality you fear ture rap like death via fatality
your act i do see no it wont fool me so do whats best for you
and take permenate leave...never 2 return from vactation...flee...

Vigorously i disfigure rappers at commandment
Deadly like poison i 'convert' 'duces surpass' to be 'dirt'
I'm the legend know as the masterpiece
The mad rapper unleashed
I 'con-fuse' you with patteners
Now exposed you're the 'con' mixed with a dead 'fuse'
You use be and me can't think of any other words 'G'ee..'
My 'arts and crafts' is to de-mane the miscellaneous
I mutilate the 'weak' terrorize the wicked
I rip the storms flesh 'The one they call the sickened'
You probably play skyrim 'take an error to the knee'
'battle me'?
take an error lyrically
Come back when you use different rhymes
You're not a true rapper you just a dike
So lets see how far you take you're hike

I freight like the night when i bomb on the site
with the MICRO.....PHONE and take over the throne
your bars are wasted like an empty gym
you dont even got those 20 inch rims
I mutilate with the style you cant duplicate
manipulate the weak minded with a super phrase
lyrically stinging like the killa bees
get on yo knees your one big hyperbole
im to you what zeus is to hercules
so do as i say, spill water on yo book of rhymes
you see that nine shoot it at yo ****ing spine
and watch nobodies emotions decline
or just accept that i am the man
lyrical abbasador of this clan
the samaraui swinging at you corrupt shoguns
puncture your lungs stepping to me man is there anyone

Yo bxtch, don't talk about yourself 'cuz they will when you gone
Your lyrics like what the hell ??? Yet you serious to the bone
Hahaa, I killed so many snitches, they call me Spitler
U gettin' nowhere and it itches, so they call u Stiffler

Plus ur mam is a milf, so how come you're so ugly ?
Are these the kind of guys that are supposed to judge me ?
Bxtch please, u look like u got more estrogen than me
I'm genuine, you fxcking look more feminine than me

When u rap they scream 'O' 'cuz it has the same form of your butthole
And O(h), baby I don't care what u say, I have a rebuttal
U ain't killing shxt but your own lyrics, time for a name switch
After I spit & finish this, they can call u the raped bxtch

Rockin' strap ons just give you what u want
If u were called Marlon, I'd still be the Don
Next time think twice before you post crap
I'mma try u 'til u die, u should know that !

One bar is better than your career and they aint even serious
puncuation in your verses but like you lacks periods
the way i kraft, your cheesy rhymes not even judgeable
better luck spittin over a young money dubbable
but even than like allstar youd be beat by candy rappers
you couldnt outspit me if you was spitting cum out by a chronic fapper
my circumfrence is untouchable you aint even on my radius
so whether your hating this or biting it it doenst matter foreal
becuz i got millions of other raps i conceal
and they all like deathrow so it goes to show
i throw harder raps than tom brady going toe to toe

Yo Molo spin a beat in Finnish

How many times do I gotta speak of my place in rap
These kids write rhymes like there **** is all that
Can't touch my lines cause I'm easily doing this and thats fact
I break your minds you wanna be me but I got all your words in the sack
When that record company signs me you ain't got sh*t on me , Run yo mouth ; Get back!

Ohhh I smash on your as*ses no problem
Can't rap with this cause my flow ; You don't got it
It's sad that you think the game you know , Fu*king stop it
Your "poetry" is so damn bad don't bit*ch it's just so , Now your heads knotted

Sorry if I put your head in a twist
I'm just fukking fed with kid's who say they can spit
Heard what you all say about what you miss
Every day you wish that HGP was every day mainstreaim ****
But please fame is not what a preach , Plain and simple ; Just love to diss

You should get a 'ghost write' for that record thing...
Without.. you've no 'flight's like kid's jacked for better kicks.
Take your flow, right? An unfetter it...
Writings a gal and you know, in the end.. you should let 'er win.

Take the time at hand - and invest in the text.
Until you find your 'stand' you'll never impress the best.
Caress the craft no don't 'compress' the rap....kid.
You're lessened jabs - have (on rep) 'shaad' attracting bids.

You're lacking wit.. - and what? ..You know about the game?
What disastrous acting from a cat ..'homegrown' to fame..
you don't think I won't blow yo an unload blows to your face?
I'm a 'rose' pose but stow folks eroding in a remote place..

So shadow

Ya tell take my time to invest in my text
Well let me ya One line of mine make's you as fake as rest
Sorry little fhella To me your silent like a mime , Who da fukk is next
You can't even rap the lyrics you write , You're a bust in this game sorry I'm the one who had to confess

But Mr.Shaadow
Writing's my "Gal" so watch where your words go
One love ain't yo pal I'll slit yo ****ing throat
Not sad cause I'm real as **** behinds these words I flow
You so bad you just gotta deal with what you need to fukking know.

Damn sorry shadow rapping against you is like beating a dead horse
How about about now you quit all that yapping before I make you even feel worse
Lyrics blasting like a Shotty I own ya through every verse
Punk little bi*ch think you got me ; Seems as usual 1luv has to show you how this sh*t works!

I don't speak Finnish, Shaadow, it's Dutch.
And here's something of me in Dutch:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iRMcLcR6rNo

Ooo a 'shautty' tote in battle but punk lugs a rental,
like 'mossy oak' ill post and throw a slug in his temple.
I'll pop the bloke under chin, mount tung in his mental..
You're a ..'no flow' - 'broke ***'.. cut from the 'thug' stencil.

Chap ~ You speek your mind in text, ..not with the fellas,
"..uhhh.."?
You're not the 'real thing' but still sell it like a relic does..
Homegrown productions is a cousin of someone bigger
Postpone the record - prone to combustion ..like a trigger..

"..Ooo" a 'shautty' tote in battle - ..but punk lugs a rental.
like 'mossy oak'.. ill post and 'throw' a 'slug' in his temple.
I'll 'piece' the bloke under chin, mount 'tung' in his mental..
You're a ..'no flow' - 'peaceful bloke'.. cut from 'thug' stencils.

Chap ~ You speek your mind in text, ..not with the fellas "..uhhh.."?
You're not the 'real thing' - but.. ..'sell it'.. like a relic does..
Homegrown productions is a cousin of someone bigger..
Postpone the record - prone to 'combustion' ..like a trigger..

Homegrown productions is 'fiction' based content..
'Real' sh!t? 'Steel clips'? ..feel this? Straight nonsense..

Homegrown productions is nothing, just a stoned stiff..
..so far 'outa this world'.. - ..you'd think he'd be ..'homesick'..

you've grown your own style but it's signature's weakness.
if skill's hidden in Shaadow it's a ninja proceedure.
you've faced lesser opponents and didnt defeat them,
just 'rebuffed' like a diligent cleaner.

you've honed your flow but you lack potent jabs though.
my lyrical punches like Rambo and Rimbaud.
Pound'ing like these drops are Cantos.
this poet's 'going down', like Sappho..

it isn't more poetic just to throw in some big words.
my lyrical punches make you Howl like you're Ginsburg.
not the Kerouac of battlerap but you're 'Beat'.
you're underground like 'Burroughs' but not deep.

you've learnt to use more rhythm.
now try more 'forceful' less 'forced' writtens.
..work on your skills, till it seems you were born with them.
pull weed from Leaves of Grass like Walt Whitman.

What the hell deleterious? Never coppied eminem. Never beat you, destroyed you.
If that wasnt the most random comment I have ever seen. And I don't think I 'can't rap for ****'..