Had 15 mins before my ride showed up
You were 'easy' for 'cheesy' to surpass when you wrote messes.
But it seems you're greasy-sleazy @ss has grown restless.
Impressive... You two bit my style and think you have the braun for it.
You 'biters' are 'trippin' - ..like there's acid in the piranha pit..
I'll flaunt a bit.. - ..but honestly the craft is my lover..
And as long as she gives back well I can't ask much of her.
Shes the rubber to my tires, and loves when I 'gun it'..
So ill take this 'log trucker' for a drive and out-run it..
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Last edited by smoothtung; 01-20-2012 at 07:47 AM.
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Funny how this pretender's always running his mouth
Originally Posted by Deleterious
All about how Shaadow's cutting sh*t out
Of Shady's lyrics like it's been copied n pasted
But wait b*tch! I don't like to play snitch but...
Remember that movie that Eminem made called 8 Mile
About how he was raised back in the day
and got laid and met Kim and how he started to battle
And how the first time he choked and then he felt so embarrassed?
Now feel free to correct me if I'm wrong
Cuz the last time I watched it was a long
Time ago, but really I could have sworn
That this line you posted came straight out of his song!
Close to the end, when nearing the final scenes
He had to battle some guys, and I think there were three,
And the second went first, he had a tight white shirt
And that's how Marshall ripped him when he got his turn.
Yeah, I'm sure when the other guy finished his rhyme
He turned to Mr. Mathers, looked him right in the eye
And proceeded to say in a derogatory way
"So I'll end this with a f*ck you and a have a nice day"Hip-hop is art. Don't make a pop hit, be smart. Take it back to the start, like KRS and Rakim use passion and heart. -
Originally Posted by _SBU
that was kindof familiar. Originally Posted by shaadow
no problem. just sayin'.
you bit me before then you acted quite sorry. Originally Posted by shaadow
if they did "bite your style" they bit me by proxy.
you use my concepts but you mess them up with sloppy rhymes.
your style's not yours and you can't even copy-right.
I view that 'C' in a circle' as sacred like a ship's porthole.
your flow's choked. my grip's caught hold.
it's fact my rap's like Avalon's battlesongs.
my rhymepad's like an atom bomb catalogue.
They're "log truckers" waiting, like I'm taking down your family tree.
you could write for seven days, ..still that wood be weak.
if "the craft's your lover" show a bit of respect.
you f*ck with dispassion like polygamous sects.
you just 'rubb er'. flows like she's squirting more.
I split "rubber".. word is born.Last edited by _SBU; 01-20-2012 at 12:05 PM.
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Deleterious.. when E.T took off you were left Delerious. Originally Posted by Deleterious
you're not a threat that's serious.
your perception is hazy.
your chances are slim and your ethic is shady.
your penmanship's lazy.
you can't hate on Shaadow, he puts effort in daily.
you rage outside of the battles after texts are Delt.
don't even try to write rhymes. disrespect yourself.
to be quite honest your style defines novice.
even the Mod is dropping nameflips on Delete'. it's ironic.Last edited by _SBU; 01-20-2012 at 12:15 PM.
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This was at Shaadow in case he missed it. Originally Posted by CheesyBacon
Hip-hop is art. Don't make a pop hit, be smart. Take it back to the start, like KRS and Rakim use passion and heart.
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Question:
I want to battle someone in a new thread. I've had no feedback on my stuff so far so not sure what level I am and who to challenge. I'm pretty much a rookie to battling but I think I'm good enough for a 1v1. What do you think?
Also, time difference might be an issue because I live in China so I'm 7-8 hours ahead of UK and 12-15 hours ahead of USA. Thoughts?Last edited by CheesyBacon; 01-21-2012 at 03:49 AM.
Hip-hop is art. Don't make a pop hit, be smart. Take it back to the start, like KRS and Rakim use passion and heart. -
Yo... check it:
This be CheesyBacon making sh*t so tasty.
Got a flow so Common and content so Shady.
Scout the field like Rodgers, hit targets like Brady.
Celebrate me, hate me, nothin you say ever gon' phase me.
Maybe y'all think cuz I'm new to this game
My name can be easily taken in vain - no way!
Now while I don't believe that's I sin I
Still be laying this down like y'all at Mount Sinai.
I'm Moses whereas y'all be gentiles,
Desperately needing to learn from my slick styles.
'Slick' like 'Rick', this sh*t flows so easy,
Spittin sh*t clean over beats so 'Yeezy'.
Please please Lord if you're there release me
From all these wack rhymes that I be hearin'.
I'm feelin' y'all needin' some lyrical healin',
I'm dealin' in squeezin' out sick sh*t, y'all kneelin'.
Before me. Adore me. I soar four stories higher
I am the standard to which y'all aspire.
A spire of this site, only been here a few days.
Inspired, admired, who knew my debut would blow y'all away.Last edited by CheesyBacon; 01-21-2012 at 12:05 PM.
Hip-hop is art. Don't make a pop hit, be smart. Take it back to the start, like KRS and Rakim use passion and heart. -
I did miss it. My bad Originally Posted by CheesyBacon
Bruv you can't write. - But.. try hard as hell..
You're 'die-hard' but.. - will 'die hard'ly felt.
The 'rap game'..
..you make the whole enterprise depressed.
And I sense under bitter rhymes bigger lie's regret..
You chose the wrong sport.. - ..and say thy raps belong..
I'd never chose the 'wrong sport' like I'm in triathlons.
I'm asking dawg..
..don't leave me to mend your failures.
I love the game.. - ..it seems you 'cees line up to rail her -
You 'did miss it'? Well this sh*t I 'dismiss' it, Originally Posted by shaadow
Your 'disses-miss', it sounds like your 'missus-did-it'.
I 'can't write'? You 'can't right' your sh*t lyrics
You should feel 'cont-rite', you'll never tarnish my image.
'Whole enterprise' - I 'enter-her-prized' hole,
Prized open, she's awaiting my prized poems.
My flow leaves her gaspin' for more
I be her best friend, b*tch you just be her wh*re.
For you the game's a sport, I 'sport' the game.
Short term railin'? No way, my aim's to raise
Her higher - and if that's you on fire,
She'll be grateful too cuz that b*tch need to be saved!Last edited by CheesyBacon; 01-21-2012 at 02:32 PM.
Hip-hop is art. Don't make a pop hit, be smart. Take it back to the start, like KRS and Rakim use passion and heart. -
Look. what you wrote right there? Yea I did it before...
But ill write til.. snow white hairs.. imprison my pores.
..an If I haven't already dropped the habbits that have plagued me,
Well I'll keep writing til.. 'addict' status.. - like through my vein streams.
Now..
You can't 'raise higher' if foundations are weak..
And you can't restore 'imagery' with mimicry in deep.
an..
You can't impress crowds with lines so formless..
An certainly can't impress Shaadow with a thesaurus. -
Man you could write until you got 'sore pores' induced.
Damn, when I read what you got I just 'saw poor' excuses.
It's not your pores imprisoned, it's your f*cking talent
In the 'status' of an 'addict' - solitary confinement.
I 'can't-raise' her high? Dawg, you 'can't-trace' my lines
So my foundations for you are way out of sight.
And talk about 'formless', come on - you're the shaadow,
I think 'she-saw-us' and knows I'm winning this battle.Hip-hop is art. Don't make a pop hit, be smart. Take it back to the start, like KRS and Rakim use passion and heart. -
You're first four lines are forced but not forcefull.
Bring em..
you want 'force'? You're in this forces war-zone.
Though let it be known, hah that you are not worthy.
You think you've sick flow? - I'm sick like the scurvey.
I've embraced my pace and often carry excitement,
No I've not been placed in 'solitary confinement' ..
I've lucid flows, ruthless blows, and stow plenty.
An if 'stupid' knows he's useless so, id prove this bloke's empty..Last edited by smoothtung; 01-21-2012 at 04:21 PM.
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Aight... I'ma try n end this sh*t right here... check:
Regular fellas might be jealous of impressions
You be leavin' cuz to them that cute-but-lame-sh*t be impressive.
But guys like me can really see your lyrics be f*ckin' 'empty',
With a michete I'm cleaving, hacking through your messes.
I'm in this 'war-zone' causin applause, as you pause to draw breath
My words cut through you like chainsaws - this is 'sudden death'.
And I'm only in here cuz I'm meant to be, sent to be.
It's not like I'm lost dawg, I did this voluntarily.
'Not-worthy'? - I think that must've been a typo.
'Not-e-worthy' - That sounds more accurate, right bro?
And as far as your 'ruthless blows' and your 'groove that grows' go,
It's more like you've 'grown-ruthless' cuz you've realized your 'groove-blows'.
Just concede defeat willingly, you know you can't beat me.
Really, the feats I can achieve will disable you mentally.Hip-hop is art. Don't make a pop hit, be smart. Take it back to the start, like KRS and Rakim use passion and heart. -
'Michete'? Spelt wrong AND old-school weaponry.
Mic heavy? get strong or fold to less than me.
....You show some promise - but honest? ..Wreck with 'speed'..
....Get modest novice and perfect before texting these...
You swing a sword while I tote matching cannons...
I swim with 'swords', and 'fish', catching salmon.
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What I'm saying 'bro' is I'm some levels above..
Give up yo. settle. - Haven't you mettled enough?
Better luck..
I'm "above.." - and well, like "..years beyond"
Your 'Buzz'ed.. I'm straight 'Lightyear' in recon. -
alright, you got it. I think I put up a decent fight though. respect man.
if you got time check out my untitled thread, proud of that one.Hip-hop is art. Don't make a pop hit, be smart. Take it back to the start, like KRS and Rakim use passion and heart. -
You're good, have some potential defffinitly. Keep writing.
An yea ill check it when I have some more time -
wanna battle someone else starting here:
Originally Posted by CheesyBacon
Hip-hop is art. Don't make a pop hit, be smart. Take it back to the start, like KRS and Rakim use passion and heart. -
What you guys think about these 10 lines I posted in a battle on another site?
Guy I'm against is called Miracle:
This pretender's a 'leper' lending his d*ck out to homos.
He needs 'divine intervention', but this time God is a no show.
I've never battled this b*tch before so I'm intrigued what he dishes out,
But I'm sure finding a decent punch's like finding 'coins in a fishes mouth'.
My sh*t turns 'water to wine', his sh*t turns wine in to water,
He's boring, I'll flaw him - if he gets any closer I'll jaw him, it's over.
Over like the time of the 'Miracle', it doesn't happen no more,
So f*ck you, you wh*re, you're never 'calming this storm',
I'm a tempest, a menace, here to 'teach' you a lesson -
You'll find out soon that death is not succeeded by resurrection.Hip-hop is art. Don't make a pop hit, be smart. Take it back to the start, like KRS and Rakim use passion and heart. -
your damn fuxkin lines aint gon' fade me, perhaps i need to lecture you, cos ur language lines wasn't genuine, u're talking bout kid, when before u spend ur sperm u gotto be lead, u're making me to get started, while u and ur damn moves got pple distracted, go stay some while for detention, likely u can make it up to correction, i aint got time for ragged *** suckers like ya, hip-hop isn't where u belong to,yeah, u must be missing ur way to pop idol.
Last edited by Zaksz; 01-23-2012 at 09:32 PM. Reason: network failure
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What a cocky kid, reckoned to vanquish.. he's nothing. - no linguist. Originally Posted by Zaksz
I'd say 'talking sh!t's' his second language but he doesn't know English.
''Aint' an 'bout'.. is that fly? He trys.. but I mean, he don't fool ya'll.
You think we see, an say.. "the guy behind the screen must be cool" dawg?
