čovek mog života :: Mia (SR-EN)

Ја učim srpskog, ali nažalost jos ne razumem sve.
Može li neko da mi pomoge s ova pesma?
Hvala puno

Nadam se da rekla sam sve korektno lol
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Oni koji vole previse izgube sve
ali ja jos uvek verujem u cuda
i sanjam kako letim visoko...

Ja sam nocna ptica
sto nema nikoga
jer trazila sam ljubav
u laznim ocima i hladnim nocima

Sada znas, sada znas
sto sam sama svakog dana

Ref.
Pusti me da zivim kako hocu
i bez tebe, i bez ljubavi
Svi sto zivot bi mi dali,
svi do jednog su me izdali

Pusti me da zivim kako hocu
kako moram, a i kako znam
Ne, ma ne treba mi niko
covek mog zivota sam ja

Ja sam nocna ptica
sto sve je videla
i verovala slepo
losim ljudima i laznim cudima

Sada znas, sada znas
sto sam sama svakog dana

Man of my life

Oni koji vole previse izgube sve
ali ja jos uvek verujem u cuda
i sanjam kako letim visoko...
Those who loves me to much they loose everything
but I still believe in miracles
and dream how I'm flying high

Ja sam nocna ptica
sto nema nikoga
jer trazila sam ljubav
u laznim ocima i hladnim nocima
I am a night bird
which is lonely
because I was found love
in the lie eyes and cold nights

Sada znas, sada znas
sto sam sama svakog dana
Now you know, now you know
Why I'm lonely every day

Refren\Chours
Pusti me da zivim kako hocu
i bez tebe, i bez ljubavi
Svi sto zivot bi mi dali,
svi do jednog su me izdali
Leave me to live how I want
and without you, and without love
Everyone who would give life for me
Everyone betrayed me

Pusti me da zivim kako hocu
kako moram, a i kako znam
Ne, ma ne treba mi niko
covek mog zivota sam ja
Leave me to live how I want
how I have to, and how I know
No, I don't need no one
Man of my life is me

Ja sam nocna ptica
sto sve je videla
i verovala slepo
losim ljudima i laznim cudima
I am a night bird
which had saw everything
and believe blindly
to bad people and lie miracles

Sada znas, sada znas
sto sam sama svakog dana
Now you know, now you know
why I'm lonely every day

I hope you will understand, because my english isn't fluently

hvala!
volim ova pesma :-)
i ne brini, razumem sve .. tvoj engleski dobar je,
nadam se da moj srpskog je isto lol

Ali mislim da "jer trazila sam ljubav" je "because I
searched for love" ne znam, mozde
nisam u pravu. :\

Originally Posted by xXalanaXx

Ali mislim da "jer trazila sam ljubav" je "because I
searched for love" ne znam, mozde
nisam u pravu. :\

U pravo si.
There are a few other suggestions that could be made here, but overall both of you are fine with your English and Serbian.

Originally Posted by partizanka

U pravo si.
There are a few other suggestions that could be made here, but overall both of you are fine with your English and Serbian.

Its always good to hear that my Serbian isn't
bad lol

@Partizanka

If you don't mind, what are the other
corrections? You've got me wondering now

Originally Posted by xXalanaXx

@Partizanka

If you don't mind, what are the other
corrections? You've got me wondering now

Sure, no problem. But I don't think of them as corrections, exactly. Zorana's translation gave the meaning well. These are just suggestions for how to also phrase some things in English. I'll just do some lines that I noticed:

Oni koji vole previse izgube sve // Those who love too much lose everything (there's nothing here to indicate "those who love ME" so I took out the "me")
ali ja jos uvek verujem u cuda
i sanjam kako letim visoko...

Ja sam nocna ptica
sto nema nikoga // (I'm a night bird) that has nobody
jer trazila sam ljubav // Because I searched for love
u laznim ocima i hladnim nocima // in lying eyes and cold nights

Sada znas, sada znas
sto sam sama svakog dana // (not a big change but I'd translate "sama" as "alone", not "lonely"; usamljena= lonely. So "Now you know why I am alone every day")

Ref.
Pusti me da zivim kako hocu // (pusti seems better in English as "let" here, to me)
i bez tebe, i bez ljubavi // both without you, and without love
Svi sto zivot bi mi dali,
svi do jednog su me izdali

Pusti me da zivim kako hocu
kako moram, a i kako znam
Ne, ma ne treba mi niko // No, I don't need anybody
covek mog zivota sam ja // I am the person/man of my life

Ja sam nocna ptica
sto sve je videla // (I am a night bird) that has seen everything/that saw everything
i verovala slepo // and believed blindly
losim ljudima i laznim cudima // in bad people and false wonders/miracles


As for your Serbian, just some cases (na primer "volim ovu pesmu") and word order but it's absolutely NO problem to understand you, and that is the most important thing. So congratulations!! It's always great to me when someone takes a real interest in learning Bos/Cro/Mon/Ser (alphabetised to show neutrality ) and makes a real attempt to use it.

Originally Posted by partizanka

As for your Serbian, just some cases (na primer "volim ovu pesmu") and word order but it's absolutely NO problem to understand you, and that is the most important thing. So congratulations!! It's always great to me when someone takes a real interest in learning Bos/Cro/Mon/Ser (alphabetised to show neutrality ) and makes a real attempt to use it.

Hvala, ti si veoma korisno .. kao obično
Pokušavam sebe, ali je teško .. I don't know a lot of people to practice speaking with >.<

Originally Posted by xXalanaXx

hvala!
volim ova pesma :-)
i ne brini, razumem sve .. tvoj engleski dobar je,
nadam se da moj srpskog je isto lol

Ali mislim da "jer trazila sam ljubav" je "because I
searched for love" ne znam, mozde
nisam u pravu. :\

You're welcome
Oh yes, you're right, "because I
searched for love" is better translation, than my