Originally Posted by
Doug Denslowe
Re: Alone
Absolutely Love it.
Note:Frankie,when you post so many,it's difficult to Reply to each piece.I wrote love this etc.about "Alone"but the comment didn't appear under it.Its appearing here!
I'll edit this box,after I read and digest each Poem.
Scavengers:Adore it!IMO complete as is.(First time I've used IMO ever!)
Bitter:Great Rhymes,but............a little bitter!
Desert:Wow,being upset Does bring out the Poet in you!Wonderful Poem,but what's for dessert?
Black Hole:Again,Wow!This could be a short play!All it needs is names for who said what.
You didn't make this easy,but it was well worth it,your new stuff is really good!!!!