Haha poor Frankie <$ (american love)
now
you leave
again
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That was beautiful, Frankie! Ladies first, I'll wait
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<$ = (not american love to me. but i get your love anyway...)
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Every time
A tear falls
I die -
I die
in the dust
I live
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I live
Therefore I must
Breathe
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Because I didnt get another eulogy today, I decided to urbandictionary.com my name. Amazing suggestions there.
Frankie, I'm off to bed - you wont have to feel rushed
I live
With every breath
you take
Edit: hmm I quite like the sound of some of my senryu today (they may not be as image provoking as the haiku but they're quite touching emotionally) I think I'll tweet them -
I'll cater to both of you
Breathe
you take my breath
away
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Whoa, watch out there, OI! You know the way to ladies' hearts! Pleasing two at once; very impressive!
Suppertime for us here . . .
Away
With brittle promises
Scoundrel
P.S. No hidden message there--just what came to mind from the word "away!"Last edited by Frankie Jasmine; 12-18-2012 at 07:38 PM.
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I wish. Thanks anyway
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Scoundrel
floats inside me
hidden
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Ooooo . . . "hidden" is too great a word to ignore!
Hidden
Beneath solid earth
Molten sea
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Would this end better with only the word "molten"? That's how I had it at first, but it felt incomplete. -
I like it as it is. Beautiful.
Molten sea
teeming with our hopes
oozing faith
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Leaky boats
holey hearts and souls
you and me
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... I'm addicted to ATL ....
You and me
A pea and a bean in a
Happy pod -
While everybody else sleeps, I pounce!
OI: My rhyme on page 6(?) wasn't intentional. My brain just couldn't escape from "blue sky".
Happy pod
slipping silver space
I float you
There is no glamour in sudden death, and nobody ever wins a war.
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Rockers Unite! => ROCK 'n' Roll Halls of Fame -
I float you
garden in desert
waiting spring
Last edited by amaryn; 12-19-2012 at 04:04 AM.