Been away a while, managed to write 2 new songs. This one's called 'I Wish You Were With Me Now'. Its a bit repetitive...

Thinking back to the times
When there was only me and you
I wish you were here
And I wish you were with me now
When I smiled you were the only one
That could see
There's the others that see
But they just see right through me

I have been waiting for so long
I need your time so please tell me whats going on
And I wish you were here
But I wish you were with me now

Thinking back to the times
When there was only me and you
And I wish you were here
And I wish you were with me now
When I smiled you were the only one
That could see
And there's the others that see
But they just see right through me

I have been waiting for so long
I need your time so please tell me whats going on
And I wish you were here
But I wish you were with me now

Is this the whole song? I think it was really nice. If this is the whole song, maybe you should try to make it a little less repetitive. You made us focus on the main indea of the song by repeating some lines, but there aren't enough details. It's harder to tell a story if the song is short. I liked it , but the feeling isn't very strong. This is just my opinion.