Let me share my love with you

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  1. denstille said: 03-22-2008 12:24 PM

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    When I first saw you
    You dazzled me with your beauty
    I couldn’t believe my eyes
    You looked like an angel from God

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    Let me share my love with you
    You mean everything for me
    Let me share my love with you
    You mean everything for me

    My heart is burning
    Oh yeah, only for you
    I don’t know how to conquer your heart
    But I do know I love you

    Let me share my love with you
    You mean everything for me
    Let me share my love with you
    You mean everything for me

    Oh tell me, baby
    Do you love me too
    I just got to know
    Do you love me too
     

  2. denstille said: 03-23-2008 02:21 PM

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    no reactions?
     

  3. denstille said: 03-24-2008 01:56 PM

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    reactions?
     

  4. GlennB. said: 03-26-2008 01:56 AM

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    i like where you were going with this..

    one thing i would change is..

    "you mean everything for me" to "you mean everything TO me"

    :]
     

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    Krent_Calstro777 said: 03-27-2008 12:36 PM

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    Not very understandable, although i have to say you're a man with few words to say. so I'll say hit the book and learn more about writing lyrics.
    Damning Reficul: Song is like singing from the light whilst the emotions can be so raw from the darkness.
     

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    curiosity_kills_the_cat said: 03-15-2013 10:43 AM

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    It all sounds good but the stanzas seem incomplete...or maybe it's just me.
     

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    Jim Colyer said: 03-15-2013 02:39 PM

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    Good to see a positive, hopeful lyric amid all the gloom!
     

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    Doug Denslowe said: 03-17-2013 05:47 AM

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    Quote Originally Posted by curiosity_kills_the_cat View Post
    It all sounds good but the stanzas seem incomplete...or maybe it's just me.
    You dug this up from 2008 just to say this?
     

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    curiosity_kills_the_cat said: 03-17-2013 02:02 PM

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    Quote Originally Posted by Doug Denslowe View Post
    You dug this up from 2008 just to say this?
    Hey Doug! Believe me , it's coming straight from the heart.
     

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    Doug Denslowe said: 03-17-2013 08:49 PM

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    Quote Originally Posted by curiosity_kills_the_cat View Post
    Hey Doug! Believe me , it's coming straight from the heart.
    Did you go over the pages of Song Lyrics,pull this one out of the 1000's posted,just to say "stanzas seem incomplete?"Of all the songs to choose from,this song,by a writer whose long since left this site,and this is all you can say?Wow,you're a deep,deep person.I'm glad I'm not on you're bad side!!
     

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    curiosity_kills_the_cat said: 03-21-2013 02:12 PM

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    Really, i didn't check to see the date of the last comment. I wrote what i truly felt. I hope the interpretation you've given to my act says something positive about me...I'll pay attention to the dates from now, but just for the record, said thread wasn't that elusive, 'twas not doug up by me(Oh, do excuse my pun)
     

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    Doug Denslowe said: 03-21-2013 03:55 PM

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    I guess your "curiosity"got to you!Meow!
     

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