Is this a good song i wrote it i need critisizm

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    Ben Beamon said:

    Default Is this a good song i wrote it i need critisizm

    ssorry

    please tell me if this is good

    Ignore this my bad i transfered the wrong song from my documents
    Last edited by Mixalopoulos; 12-06-2011 at 09:38 AM.