unfinished song, please comment

Dreams are running dry like rivers
theres no room for love
live to be forgotten

You never know it
in the rush of the crowded city
but you can feel it inside
i tried to show you
but you kept pushing me away

I have been round
the world and back
every place is the same
just a different name
Im searching for
a place with no name
for people like us

I swore never to stop
im beginning to crack
but im not broken yet
you can fix me again
im running out of time

I dont know
what your waiting for
you got nothing
left to leave behind
why not risk it all
you might find something
worth living for

Nothings stopping you
dont be afraid
lead on and others will follow
walk on walk on
and if the ground crumbles
i know you will learn to fly

Its gonna take some time
you might start having doubts
as time passes
just keep your faith in me
and i will keep in you
we will make it tonight

Walk on walk on fly on
dont give up
were gonna make it
your closer then it seems
it might be just around the corner

Maybe its just across desert
maybe on the other side of the mountains
maybe its high in the sky
maybe beyond the moon

I dont know
where it is
but i know
your gonna find it
a place with no name

Take my soul
take me to the skies
take me to the stars
just lead on
and i will follow
cuz i believe in you

Walk on walk on fly on
dont stop
i know you can do it
you can make it
you can find it
only you

We used to feel
like we have it all
and we had it all
but we blew it all away
its not too late
theres still time

Anyone?