Number One Contender...(Full Track Lyrics) (Wrote By JD)

(Hook)
Il slap and clap-up your leading crew member,
Just take my advice think twice and remember,
My raps are only nice january through november,
Because flows turn cold as i chew-up-december!
My metaphorical blows screw up all contenders,
My fist-met-there-nose they will all surrender!
This is JD the number one ****ing contender!...

(Verse 1)
Aint no obstacle in rap that i couldn't demolish,
In battle im a general lines are spit-an-polished,
Quickly-abolish ya leader so called rep protector,
Mcs tryna steal this gold now im a debt collector,
Put ya money were ya mouth is if your a contender,
Iv razor sharp punchlines that'll change ya gender,
So remember im the real deal an not some pretender,
I will never surrender coz iv got to much ambition,
See..... im chasing my dream's & not the competition,
My text written submission put me in top position,
This aint even da extreme edition & i sense-ya-fear,
Rap is tense-this-year its why ya keep a pistol-near,
I run the rap division best just adhere-to-my-career,
Diamond flow precision so let this be crystal-clear,
Il keep on shining in this rap game like a chandelier,
High an untouchable droppin heat like a bombardier..

(Hook)
Il slap and clap-up your leading crew member,
Just take my advice think twice and remember,
My raps are only nice january through november,
Because flows turn cold as i chew-up-december!
My metaphorical blows screw up all contenders,
My fist-met-there-nose they will all surrender!
This is JD the number one ****ing contender!...

(Verse 2)
Contenders dont come anymore whack-than-you,
Surrender coz il leave ya more black-than-blue,
Il clap-ya-crew iv only got the back-of-a-few!
Z-Ro, Rave & Mafia have spat-raw-tracks-two,
Mcs that-at-a-finger-snap will be attackin-you,
A wolf-pack an your just another snack-to-chew,
Aint no true contender that could fit-my-shoes,
Emit-my-views like alarm clocks il hit-ya-snooze,
Make ya submit-till-ya-lose like wrestling-moves,
Da flow i use a like a war vessel-on-a-cruise, wit..
Rocket-rhymes dat missile-crews couldn't defuse!
I start-to-ooze most mcs are smart-not-to-abuse,
'Coz they know il serve'em like a-la-carte-menus!
Punches knock them drunk like stella-artois-booze,
I make the best of contender emcees confused......

(Hook x2)
Il slap and clap-up your leading crew member,
Just take my advice think twice and remember,
My raps are only nice january through november,
Because flows turn cold as i chew-up-december!
My metaphorical blows screw up all contenders,
My fist-met-there-nose they will all surrender!
This is JD the number one ****ing contender!...

JD

Nice, i like the way you manage to keep the bars the same length while not straying off topic which is a waaay too common mistake. You haven't commited the crime of rhyming for the sake of rhyming which is good!
One pointer though; which is that with this kind of rhythmic rap you need try and make sure MOST of the bars flow out of your mouth with the same sort of feel. Or at least every set of 2, 4, 6 or 8 bars are similar in where the short syllables and long syllables are. For example, words like not, pot, cot are short words to say, while shout, how, cow, now are longer in the mouth. You need to keep the use of short and long syllables similar in each bar to give it a nice rhythm over the beat and a good rhythm and flow in each line.
Obviously, i don't know how this would be sung but this is just a general pointer which, although it may not apply here, is a good thing to know when writing this sort of mainstream rap.