I Need You

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    Zer0 said:

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    We were supposed to be, forever and ever,
    Now im sitting here thinking, forever is never,
    But I know inside my heart is crying out for you,
    Thinking bout the days you would say that I love you,
    Youre the perfect girl I know I made a mistake,
    Now im here without you, knowing ill never be the same,
    Sorry that I hurt you, that I pushed you away,
    Know if you took me back, it wouldn’t be the same,
    Ill be the guy you fell in love with that day,
    And make you feel the way you make me feel every day,
    Cause something not right without you here by my side,
    And when your arms were around me I felt like I could fly,
    You were my angel sent from up in the sky,
    But now that Im without you I just wanna die,

    (Chorus)
    Because baby without you life just doesn’t feel the same,
    Never knew this girl could make me feel this way,
    Just hold me real tight and say its gonna be ok,
    And I promise ill never forget how I felt today,
    And ill love you till the day I die,
    Never gonna make you cry,
    Promise to never ever lie,
    Baby I need you,

    I made a mistake and im paying for it now,
    Cant believe how hard reality is settling down,
    This feeling in my chest I cant even explain,
    A part of me is missing, without ill never be the same,
    Im afraid to fall asleep because of whats in my dreams,
    You invade them every night and the more it seems,
    The more I try and forget, the more the pain,
    The more I wanna move on, the more I feel this way,
    The feeling of being lost, and confused and dazed,
    I miss you more and more, every single day,
    I wanna prove to you, that im the one for you,
    I wanna prove to you, that this loves true,
    And I know you feel it too deep down inside,
    But baby know I could never ever hurt you again,

    [Chorus]

    If I ever knew one thing in my life, its that this love is for real,
    If I could only have one thing in life, Id want you as my girl,
    If I only want one thing in life, it would be to marry you one day,
    If I need anything in life, you gotta know that its you,
    And If I could only say one more thing just know, I love you,

    [Chorus]
     
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    Zer0 said:

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    Any comments, what do you think?
     
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    PointZero said:

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    These are some pretty good lyrics, but the emotion is struggling to fully get through. Tinker around with some verse wording, and think of using other words besides die, cry, today, way... that sort of thing.
     
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    Zer0 said:

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    I appreciate the comment, thanks for the advice.