A few of my poems

Thread: A few of my poems

Tags: None
  1. Cherry_Sulpher said:

    Smile A few of my poems

    I have been looking for a forum where I can talk about my favourite lyrics, and share my own lyrics/poetry for sooo long. Now that I have found it, I'm extatic These are a few of my own poems that I have written. I know they may not be to everyone's taste but I hope you can all appreciate that I'm only 14 and have alot to learn about poetry yet.

    TWISTED GAME
    Every time I ask myself
    What happens every day?
    It feels like redemption
    So silently I say
    Are any of us real?
    Are we even sane?
    Or am I just a player
    In your twisted game?

    Tears flow down my face
    Blood screams from my skin
    Burning churns within me
    A prick from the cruelest pin
    I try my best to cry out
    To hollow out your name
    But I feel like a player
    In your twisted game

    Drowning in suppression
    Strings hang from my limbs
    But I’m just a puppet
    Hovering in sins
    I may be in your grasp
    But never will be tamed
    I refuse to be a player
    In your twisted game

    You’re pushing me around
    Swinging every stride
    Echoing your sound
    Trying to abide
    You know it’s gonna happen
    With your flawless aim
    I cannot be your player
    In this twisted game

    Can’t help but spinning faster
    Getting out of hand
    I clench my fists in anger
    Writhing in the sand
    Now that it’s all over
    We both know who to blame
    I was just a player
    In your twisted game

    INSANITY
    Thoughts racing
    My mind is pacing
    Feels like emotions are erasing
    Still in silence
    Forget the violence
    Pure memories are replacing

    Cascades of gleaming
    Water streaming
    Through my mind whilst I am dreaming
    I fake a smile
    It’s not worthwhile
    But it stops the tears from redeeming

    A nightmare bled
    Within my head
    That left me hanging by a thread
    A terror beat
    Full of deceit
    Now I’m numb but full of dread

    My skin is burning
    Stomach churning
    Every part of me is turning
    I’m spinning faster
    Unable to master
    The self control that I’ve been learning

    It’s brewing quicker
    With every flicker
    It boils always getting thicker
    In need of release
    So the pressure can cease
    To stop myself from getting sicker

    I see a glow
    Though faint and slow
    It might just stop that final blow
    Of my own devices
    Emptiness suffices
    It only hurts when I know

    The end of the line
    Though I feel fine
    All the pieces start to align
    Through all the madness
    Pain and sadness
    I knew our deaths would intertwine

    The final one: It is nameless.

    This is the way it had to be
    The only way to make them see
    I know they never understood
    But I always knew they never would

    I lay here drowning in my tears
    Each night I face my darkest fears
    But though it may seem odd to you
    I don’t fear death like others do

    That’s not the way that my mind works
    Deep within a shadow lurks
    No one ever hears my screams
    Not even in my sweetest dreams

    For only nightmares come to me
    All that was and ever will be
    Blood pouring from this hole
    Not in my skin but in my soul

    There’s no where left for me to hide
    No matter how hard I’ve tried
    Now that hell has dealt its card
    In body and mind I’m always scarred

    All that I have ever known
    All the hatred I’ve been shown
    Now its time to let it go
    Its time for all of them to know

    The only way to end this pain
    I’m losing grip of what keeps me sane
    And even now, to this day
    I regret it having to end this way

    You strike me one, you strike me twice
    And as I lay there, cold as ice
    I’ll always be your sacrifice

    Thank you for taking the time to read them. I do realise that they are long :P

    Cherry_Suplher
  2. VivaPalestina's Avatar

    VivaPalestina said:

    Default

    Great work, I like them
  3. Cherry_Sulpher said:

    Default

    Thank you
  4. Inskeepruler's Avatar

    Inskeepruler said:

    Default

    I really like them. This is more my genre of lyric than others on this forum. They are very good. The title for the last one could be Sacrifice.
  5. Cherry_Sulpher said:

    Default

    Thank you so much That's actually a good idea These are my type of lyrics. I listen to songs with lyrics in this genre quite alot so thank you.
  6. lil genius said:

    Default

    woow ur realy good keep it up x