Thousand pieces (tell me what you think please)

many years have gone bye ,since that fateful day
many years i have watched within the mirrors all around you
unable to touch your smooth skin, or kiss your sweet lips
i have always been there for you within the mirros
but now as i watch you
a tears roles down my face, hits the ground
and I!!.....
(chorus)
Shatter, shatter, shatter
into a thousand pieces
you dont feel me anymore, you don hear me
you dont remember me anymore
ohhhhh no reason for me to stay
there's no room for me in your life
time for me to leave now!
shatter, shatter,shatter into a thousand pieces
goodbye my only love
i shall wait for you at heavens gate for you
all the mirros breat and shatter
into a thousand pieces as i leave this world
(chorus end)
the pictures of you and me are gone now
all that remain are just you and him now
ohhhhh i watch you at night
i see him touch you as i used to
i see him lay beside as i used to
OHHHHH the pain of watching you is tearing me apart within
you told me no one could take my place in your heat
but here i am watching him take my place
tears rain dwon my face, as they hit the ground beneath
I!!!!
(chorusx2)
you have cast my memory away
like a bad nightmare
there's no reason for em to stay
dont dont worry my love
i always will love you no matter what
you don't think of me no more
so now nothing ties me to this world
i shall wait in the life after death
watch as i break free
and all the mirros just....
(chorus x3)
{end of song}

I like it! you can really feel the emotion of the song throughout

It's a good heart wrenching song. Very honest. That's what is good about it. I'd fix up some spelling errors sentences like "i shall wait for you at heavens gate for you." You only need the one for you. Otherwise, it's good =)