Fallen (part 2 of 2 tell me what you think)

i tried so hard to hide the feeling
but it proved to start to hide
ive broke heavens rule
but im ready to pay the price
im falling down with these broken wings
falling down to the land of
mortals
but i do not care its all worth this feeling growing inside me

(chorus)
now i can tell her what i felt
for all these years for now im free
ive fallen ive fallen
ive fallen for her
ive fallen in love with her
maybe now i can say
what ive always felt
ive fallen fallen
from heavens gates with these broken wings
yet i do not regret it
the feeling is worth the pain and damnation
ive fallen ive fallen
fallen in love with a fallen angel
(chorus end)

i dont know what to do
i dont know where to go
just have to follow where the feeling takes me
i travel on and on to find her
heaven gates have closed on me
there no way back for me
so i go on and on to my salvation

(chorus x2)

but itsto late
i took to long
i see her holding hands with someone
i see her lips touch his
i can feel my heart bleeding inside
what will i do now
i cant say what i feel now
she belongs to someone else
gues iw ill just wonder the earth all alone
hiding in the darkness till the time comes
till i can take her hand in mine
i have nothing else except this feeling
i was so close thinking......

(chorusx3)

So this has yet to be finished? I must say, you left it at a very depressing point, lol. All the same, this brings many thoughts to me and I hope to make since of them when you are finished. Until then.