top of my head rap :)

i rise to the top
when a drop a get over this flop
i do what i do to make it very clear
that am one of a kind who's got no fear
i hit the perfect pitch and plan to get rich
is this a dream give yourself a pinch
because when a spit you flinch
iv'e got the fluent style
that gets the girls to smile
you know i got good flow and my tunes are sharp
everyone got no chance you might as well rhyme to a harp
you need to know al get more riches
and **** more *****es
pound them till i drop wont stop even when im on flop
got no reason to stop
they've got no reason to complain
ill just pump it up and grasp their mane
if you think you can stop me put your money up
put you riches up **** it put your honey up
i will show you how to do this
and in the end al give your gal a candy kiss
you will try to dis but im the abyss
im a true villain
and you know am an outlaw killin
you try to be an outlaw smoking weed in your back shed
wondering what its like to get head
while you go brain dead
as the girls grasp my meat and get fed
i play it well this is my game
one road trip to fame
i put my hand on my chest to the union jack
knowing my rhymes are across great Britain and yours are whack
you all need to go trot get shot
before my rhymes give you a brain clot
its just a matter of time before you commit suicide
well you will give it your best shot at least you tried

comments would like some advice or battle lol haha

Before I criticize it, I want others to do so to make sure I am not being biased.