New To This My Song: Fairytale

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This is very good, I love the part with the tulips - rose thorns, it's a beutiful opposition. But there's seems something odd with the sylabelles and rhymes, but it's probably just me

I love this too, the words and thoughts flow really well and it just grabs me. I always hope for nice endings too, and just for that I'm sending some love with this post. for whoever might want a lil piece of it
Nice work, I'll be watching for more from you.