Shaylee

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  1. PointZero's Avatar

    PointZero said:

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    I see a sweet young girl,
    smart enough to get in trouble.
    Who constantly puts her heart,
    on sale for less than double.

    This girl is who I dream for,
    and who I yearn for.
    This girl is the one that I love.

    I see a boy who wants,
    whatever his hands can get.
    Hurtful, demanding and greedy.
    He always has the highest bet.

    This girl is who I care for,
    and who I look out for.
    This girl is the one I love.

    She never seems to notice,
    that I'm right there beside.
    She always wants to talk,
    about how her heart just died.

    I don't know what more I can do.
    Hopefully she sees the light on her own.
    I will help her if she needs it.
    I will defend if she pleas it.
    I will die if she wishes it.
    My ultimatum is nothing,
    without her signature.

    This girl is who I do for,
    and who I live for.
    This girl is the one I love.

    I see a sweet young girl,
    smart enough to get in trouble.
    Who constantly puts her heart,
    on sale for less than double...
    Last edited by PointZero; 01-17-2011 at 07:55 PM.
     
  2. MoonRide*r*'s Avatar

    MoonRide*r* said:

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    Ah man there is just "too much" insight in these lyrics, and I mean that in a complimentary way. I can identify (in either first, second or third person) with every verse and every line. I'm thinking you know what you want to do musically with that long verse, I can kinda see it, coz the rest of the structure looks good from where I'm sitting. Nice job, very very nice!
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