I wish my home is in texas

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  1. khit said:

    Smile I wish my home is in texas

    I WISH MY HOME IS IN TEXAS
    verse 1:
    It was Sunday Night at my house; I’m with my laptop as always
    Browse everything in this virtual world to have a little fun
    But suddenly, i stop my mouse clicking humming about this picture
    Staring at those cowboy hats in unknown web pages

    A stupid pop up showed up with their noisy ads,
    It comes together with strum of guitar that brake the silent of my room
    Country song went through my ears, force my feet to stomp by the rhythm
    And a voice of a young man was heard singing…

    chorus:
    I wish my home is in Texas
    With only country songs and big smile
    People can laugh enjoying God blissed
    I wish my home is in Texas
    Where cowboy hats are wore proudly
    And one small town is a one big family
    I wish my home is Texas

    verse2:
    I plug my ear set into my ears; take out my iPod from my pocket
    With a really cool move, putting my thumb in the fancy buttons
    I feel so dead, looking at this modern music that’s getting hard on my taste
    And I miss that guitar strum, a guitar strum from a country song


    chorus:
    I wish my home is in Texas
    With only country songs and big smile
    People can laugh enjoying God blissed
    I wish my home is in Texas
    Where cowboy hats are wore proudly
    And one small town is a one big family
    I wish my home is Texas

    verse3:
    I open my eyes in this crowded street; and I hate the scene that I see
    Everyone’s busy with phones, walking straight up with no expression
    I saw my feet “these shiny playboy shoes aren’t cool at all”
    And I heard the sound of my heart saying

    chorus:
    I wish my home is in Texas
    With only country songs and big smile
    People there laugh enjoying God blissed
    I wish my home is in Texas
    Where cowboy hats are wore proudly
    And one small town is a one big family
    I wish my home is Texas


    ~end~

    definately a country song : )
     
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    MoonRide*r* said:

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    Yep, defo country. Btw in case u've never been there, "the grass is always greener" but yeah it's cool.
    Good structure, good message here too. Write more

    PS: I can imagine a guitar-strumming waltz as the tune. Yes/no?
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  3. khit said:

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    yeah, i've never been there, but i love country so much.

    anyway thank u so much for liking it
    i was so scared to post it in here plus english is not my first language too.

    i actually thinking about taylor swift kinda strumming,
    but seems like guitar strumming waltz is not a bad idea.
     
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    Zachre said:

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    Haha while Texas does have some country, we're pretty Urbanized. The rich folk own ranches though :P
     
  5. khit said:

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    haha, yeah, when i wrote the lyric, i kinda google about texas, and i realised about it.
    But still, it is very identic with those cowboys, cornfields and guns and beers kinda stuff. haha. so i guess the lyric still suitable with the title :P